Ok um I love this so mutch mainly because Sinclair survives and it isn't a ship, I literally cried when Sinclair died! But now I feel relieved and happy that he's alive, this is one of the greatest fanfics I've ever seen, thank you for making this

Two Alphas, that'd possibly keep Delta from dying

So, is Delta going to save Mark Meltzer too?

I wish you could save Sinclair he is one of my favorite Bioshock characters. While I would love it if you continued this I'm OK with it just being a oneshot. Anyway, great oneshot I enjoyed it.

Please continue this!

I like the fanfic now continue it

I like it is a good story and but what ending are you going to do when you end your story are going to go with the good ending where the little sister are alive and eleanor is good or are you doing the evil ending where the little sister are dead and eleanor is evil i and are you going to kill delta off or are you going to let him alive and dont stop make ch:2 i like your story

this story is really awesome you gotta continue it!

Ooooh! I love Sinclair! And his Big Daddy form too! 8D (But mostly Sinclair... he's just so amazin' and I love his accent... I grew so attached to him in the game and then when I had to kill him, I was utterly heart-broken ;-; Sophia Lamb is such a b*tch!)

I love this version of that 'What if' we had the option to save Sinclair... I wish the game did... Sinclair was like the best friend I never had. ;-; Bwah! I'm still stumped that I had to kill him.

Sinclair has to be one of my favorite video game character in the history of ever. T.T

Thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed reading Sinclair survive and heck...

And AWWWW... I killed Mark Meltzer... ; But that was because I thought it was just an "extra little sister glitch" I swear I didn't know that was him! ;-; Or else I would have let him lived happily with his lil sis/daughter. Urghhh... now I feel so bad.

Suhweet!

Awesome story. I always wished there was a way to save Sinclair. Good work.

This was a fantastic story. Sinclair was personally one of my favorite characters. Glad he got saved in this story. Keep up the good work.

-Dovahkiin-

I think you should continue it! Granted it has been a little over a year, but I hope you get to work on this story again. Don't leave us hanging!

im finding it hard NOT to like your stories.

I like it