Man, previous chapter, they finally made up and now they're being real roommates or brother-like figures.

To the author. Just read your every single one of your stories from 1 to latest. Then, you'll be able to have your ideas on new next chapters on your stories. Just reread them and then you'll be able to think of a big climax of some sort for the stories. Besides, I wanna see what happens to Max and his new family & friends. And Sparky the Pikachu, Shinx & Oshawott competing for the Pokéathlon. Don't stop your stories, Gl1m0. They have great morals. Don't give up on them as Max and Sparky won't. ;D

Hey! This story about True Friendship is great and touching, but it's almost 3 years! Work on Chapter 14: Sakura no Yume so we'll see what happens next!

Maybe in later chapters; We will see Tammy (maybe now as a Pikachu herself) and what caused the fire in Sparky's home.

Friendship is Magic! (Of course that's in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic) Please, continue your stories!

Its a good story with good spelling and grammar. I enjoy reading it,

(Okay, I'm sorry, I did not intentionally copy YOUR world of Pokeville in my story, my world of Pokeville is like, completely different from yours. I might have gotten a little steamed when I saw that your world was also called Pokeville, but, there's nothing I can do about that, right?)

Hello I really am loving your work (and I thought The Pokemon Project was addictive...) And am very happy

To find out about this work... Also I have a question about the other story. I have a story where Team rocket and Team galactic come together to make Team alpha..

Looking forward to a reply at

Hey, gl1m0, could you go to my profile? I want to talk to you. I don't have any stories up(Because i'm new), but, I will soon I think you'll like them. Anyway, I want to become friends with you, and I need someone to vote in my poll, so check my profile out sometime. Thank you!

:D I love this story, it's just... AWESOMESAUCE! XD Update soon.

-Manic

Also, another friend option should be Eevee. Why didn't I put that in my previous message? I don't know… Sorry 'bout that :(

Personally, I think that if Shinx and Chikorita start dating, they should probably evolve to Bayleef and Luxio. I think people tend to think of first forms as little kids and evlving would make them more mature. Technically, even Pikachu is an evolved form, making him older than Shinx if you look at it like that.

My last bit is just a personal bit; are there going to be any Totodiles, or Dratinis? I just like those guys. Actually, I think a Dratini or a Dragonair would be a good character to use as one of the Pokéathlon opponents. I'd recommend Larvitar and Bagon as its teammates.

But seriously, I'd like to see Pikachu making friends with a Totodile... Or any of Charmander's forms.

Personally, I feel that your addition of Plusle and Minun a few chapters back was a good idea. They are very compatible with Pikachu stories. Anyway, I'm excited for the next chapter, so please update soon. :)

This is an amazing story! But, I was hoping for piplup and Pikachu to get together, sight, I guess that's just me...

Query: What do these guys do for a living? You mention something about Pip's job or something in one of the first chapters, but since then everyone's just been goofing off.

Not that I'm complaining, mind you. When you finish this little night on the town, however, why not try having Pikachu try getting a job.

Just a thought.

Cute little chapter. 'Night of the living Banette' huh? Clever. :)

The part about Plusle and Minun being pussies surprised me. I just don't see Shinx as the type to say something like that. Nothing that harsh, but he was frustrated so... yeah.

I'll R and R 13 later today. Right now, I have science and Math work to attend to. :/ yuk

Hmm, I think that small (and well hidden note) about a yellow 'mon in chpt 12 was Tammy, either that or one of Pikachu's parents who somnehow managed to get out of the fire (though knowing your style of plot until now, that doesn't sound like something that would happen). This is kinda reinforced when Pikachu is thinking that she is out there somewhere, although I can't remember if when you mentioned Tammy before (i'm sure you have) you said she was a pikachu or whatever.

Brilliant pair of chapters, good to see everything is getting going for everyone, and I hope it works out for them, although Piplup and Oshawott's budding relationship looks a little doomed right now unless something happens on Piplup's end.

Wish you the best for your writing, and hope you can get chapters for either story up fast, there both on my "must read" lists.

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Hey, gl1m0, CHAP 12 must come immediately! Apparently, you're actually ALIVE because you updated "The Pokemon Project" a while ago. So get you're lazy, fat butt up, and start working! :3 Oh, and I expect a gem rock by the end of this year from plusle's collection! XD

Another great chapter