Overall a good chapter but it had a few grammar issues, try to use Microsoft word's spelling check to iron out the kinks

Very interesting so far, looking forward to reading the rest

More chapters please

best story ever

soooooooooooo ssssssaaaaaaaaaddddd

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I LOVE it soo much! I really want to know how it all turns out

*sigh* okay, this is literally the twentieth unfinished story that was actually really good I have found on this site. I'm not going to even bother reading the rest of it because of how I'm gonna feel when I reach the cut off point :( aw well, there's more stories like these to come anyway. *sighs again*

Do you ever plan on finishing this story?

Wow, it's been two years, what do we do? and I'm glad that you're going back and fixing stuff. Your main problem was sentence structure, or grammar. I recommend getting a beta reader, or someone who will read it over and help you fix any errors.

Lol, Zuko must have been a little freaked out when Appa took off.

Dear freakin lord, Zuko make up your mind!

Please tell me he doesn't rape her because she threw herself at him, or that when he does start to get it on he just stops, or that she has that cliche of 'oh I don't want it now it's too much! But it feels so good!'

Hmmm, so Aang is going to get Katara when she's dropped off because the Spirits know shit. And Zuko is going to drop her at Omashu like last weeks garbage and she's going to take that? Even after they kissed?

...gah. It's hard to read this, yet the underlying plot is good and I need to read Zutara. The writing is agonizing, and most of it doesn't make sense. I want to enjoy it, really I do.

I didn't think of Zuko as so wishy-washy, when he made up his mind, it was basically done. Either he likes her or he doesn't.

I really have been curious, why do the chapters have such weird numbers? Also, how long has she been on the ship? No matter what Aang says, at one point or another, Sokka will go after her. I did like how you explained why Aang was doing nothing. How could she be that starving? Why was the bathroom door unlocked? And why didn't she use the water to heal herself? She couldn't have gone more than three days without water, and you said in a chapter past that she had bee there at least a week. She should be dead without liquid for that long. I know she could have had tea, but at least mentin it. And she should still be healing/sick from her infection. If it's been a while since that, then say something about a time skip.