Really enjoyed reading this. When I first read that it was Arthur who was singing, I had to do a double take but it made sense when it was all an act. Really like Ariadne in here as well as their interactions. Love this!

Poor Arthur...but I loved the ending. Going to read the continuation, now. :-D

That last line was brilliant! Definitely favourited - Ashabagawa

OK, I was not expecting that last line! Hahah. Such a charming fic! :)

Cute :3

Google will always pull through in times of need, I swear.

loved it!

Hey, I just discovered this really cute story.

I love it when my favourite characters are beaten up/tortured/kidnapped/etc., so you did me a great favour with this.

It was a beautiful style of writing and very realistic. I liked that it wasn't "oh Ariadne, I love you!" and "oh Arthur, I love you too!" because that way it was much sweeter.

Keep up the good work,

M_w

this is so cute! i really hope you continue it. :)

that last line is priceless

Nice. Cute and satisfying. :)

This is great. Ariadne and Arthur don't seem like the kind of characters to just jump into each other's arms, so the fact that you used restraint and built up tension between them seems more real. Their relationship still moves forward by the end of the scene, but they're both tentative about it. That strikes me as very in character!

I hardly ever (never) give reviews. (I know, bad, bad me) But this story is waay too cute and good to have only 5. You deserve much more than that. I hope you write more Ariadne/Arthur stories, because this one was utterly adorable.

I like it :)

There is gonna be a next chapter right ?

I loved it!