That was an amazing story. I usually don't read stories with OC's in them, but this one was amazing.

loved it, Raven is my favorite person from teen titans.

it is kinda stupid to just show everyone how your powers work, villains will know how to counter it.

that hint about her brother was a little thick on there, thought it surprises me that she did not connect the dots.

You should make a sequel I actually really enjoyed this story. Good job.

SOOOOOO ADORABLE I LOVE IT MOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEE

not enough anti-hero for me to enjoy.

This is so awesome! I mean, everyone is so amazingly in character. Great job! :D

You have the potential to become a great writer. The story was choppy in some places, but it was overall enjoyable. Figuring out how to make the plot flow smoothly will come with time and practice. The character personalities could have been more deep and the tone should be more consistent. There are a lot of worksheets online that you can use to help develop your characters, and writing prompted one-shots/timed writings is one of the best ways to practice getting your point across in the shortest way possible. If you master that, then writing long, drawn out stories will become easier. Do you read often? I suggest reading books from authors and genres that you normally wouldn't; this will expose you to styles that you aren't used to, which will lead you to figuring out your own writing style. I'm sorry if I sound harsh. I honestly don't mean any harm. Everything I've said in this review are just suggestions, and you are by no means obligated to follow them. The idea of this story was good, and I really liked reading your fic. Definitely my favourite teen titan fic on this site. I'm sorry that this is really long. I'd love to see your writing skills improve. Keep it up! :)

This is so cute! I love it! Thank you for bothering to write this masterpiece!

this was the best. you're the best. thank you 3

my heart has melted

oh my you twist my heart twenty times in thirty directions

this chapter was an emotional whirpool! I had to googled the puzzle ring and it's gorgeous. and the gifts really fit with the chatacters. swooned and did a happy dance over the mistletoe but omg raven process your feelings woman! masterful writing yet again.

the tshirt is hilarious! the ending with Alex sneezing is too adorable. the whole snow fight was utterly sweet and cute. the interactions between everyone just unfff. and go beast boy!