Good. Very IC. I'd read more of this pairing!

LOVED THIS! YOU MUST MAKE MORE STORIES WITH THESE TWO!

Unbelievably vomit inducing... Hilarious... Great. Nice job!

I think it needs to be a little bit longer, but overall, nice story.

I really liked it. I was sweet, without being 'vomit inducing' as you said above xD
I love FlacoXKatt and you did a really great job of portraying his proud, bold manner.
Bravo!

That was a cute story. I liked that Katt started out by poking fun at Falco. And the little insults like fluffy and freezer paws. And the descriptions were actually helpful to me since I am currently writing a Falco and Katt story. Great work!
-general whitefur

I'm getting into Star Fox now,as I usually write for other genres.I like the Falco/Katt pairing,and this story suits them fluff wasn't overdone,I really enjoyed characters were bang on!Falco's acceptance of the situation at the end had to be my favourite part, job!

Sword: That was really sweet! I loved it!

Your writing was really good. The descriptions and in-character thoughts were well done.

Ditto to FoxPilot.

I didn't see this as an M rated shot, T is more appropriate as the swearing is very little and there is nothing to risqué for anyone 13 or older. But, rating isn't a big deal unless you're putting it as K and have a raunchy lemon.

The writing of this was cute, I've not quite encountered a lot of Katt but I did enjoy your writing of the master pilot and the kitten.

Errors are as Fox mentioned very minor fixes or things that are simply mistakes we all encounter.

As a first story this is lovely.(: I was quite excited to read it and wasn't disappointed nor was there any vomit. Don't be over critical of your work, but don't forget to also be a bit sceptical of it. You seem quite shy of your writing when you shouldn't be. We all crash and burn once or twice before we can write smoothly and make a masterpiece of fanfiction- or fiction of any kind.

You're doing well, and it was enjoyable. Great work.(:

I personally think it should be a bit more sexual Just a thought

Meh... To be honest I never liked Katt. I don't know why, but to me, she seems like a jerk. I never liked FalcoXKatt pairings.

D'awww :-) I normally like FoxXKrystal, but those two are sooooo cute and sooooo entertaining at the same time.

whoa this is a really cool story, i hope you would do more falco/katt fics. Please keep it up ok

good, did,nt see any errors but I dont have a knack for that. Oh and instead of the cliche Foxpilot metioned someone could fall through the ceiling wearing a sombrero eating ice cream sandwiches juggling sacks of potatoes!

I have good news! This was not unbelievably vomit-inducing. Congratulations, new writer-this is one of the better first works I've seen.

So, you're looking for critique? Here you go. Your writing is mostly excellent. There were very few mistakes, many of them nit-picky and easy to ignore. One of them is that "Starfox," should be two words: "Star Fox." Also, when using this form of "too," a comma should precede it when ending a sentence. Like: "I want to get ice cream, too."

Maybe a little word arrangement ideas could be changed, but you seem to have actual talent with writing. And the plot is believable without being way out in the field. Plus, the time-frame works with both the post-64 period and the post-Command era. This is a good thing for the story, though I am curious to know which Katt we're talking about.

Two things, though. First, I wouldn't classify this as "Family." "Friendship" is a better term, even though Katt and Falco may consider themselves closer than that. Also, the ending needed somebody walking in and seeing them in their position, though that may have been far too cliche.

Still, you have some great work on your hands here. Hopefully we can expect to see more from you in the future.