It’s really good ! Please update again !

this is enjoyable piece of writing! :3

Please update again! This is so well written! And I love how you've portrayed Edward.

Please update I love this!

it's really good

The first sentence of the summary is like 'the gamer', the webtoon.

Very interesting story. I'm intrigued, honestly. The characters are well-developed/well-introduced, and your writing style is wonderful, in my opinion. Wish I could read more.

from what i remember of the original version of this story the reason Al had vanished was that Voldemort had taken him because he's an alchemist, but he'd put himself in a coma so they couldn't get anything from him. I also remember Ed emerging form the flaming ruins of Malfoy manor carrying Al and nodding to Mustang who was the other reason for the manor's ruined state, Ed having done about half of it before Mustang got there.

What happened to Alphonse anyway? Poor Ed, hes so serious!

I really like this story! It's very well written. Everything is clear and easy to understand. I really have to wonder, though... What could have happened to Alphonse? Certainly something big to have made Ed react in that way. I hope he finds a lead soon! But then he'll probably be tortured by only finding bits and pieces afterward. I'm really excited for some Ed vs Umbridge! Thanks for sharing this story with me!

So... Next chapter, please? You can't just stop it there. You can't. I crave more, need more, thrive on more... Please!

Only one thing can be said about this: Holy CRAP that's good. I WANT MORE!

Please continue this, I think this is a really interesting and nice story that's a waste to go abandoned..

I like the idea that ed is an apprentice, and also I am interested in the enhanced background story from the FMA side. Please keep writing this, it has only just started and I would love to continue reading! Thank you!

Great Chapter! I really like the sound of it! On to the Next One!