lee and may hissing at kevin and ricky be thankful that edd gave s mercu beating

so cute

I know I'm - *checks watch* - six years too late to really comment on this, I just want to say how incredible this story is even for how short it is. If you think it's right don't change it. I won't forget you.

I really did like this story. You made a very dramatic scene to emphasize the point you were trying to make. In fact I love this story. What happened brought them closer together than ever before. I envy the idea of having a true love. Someone that you care deeply for and respect. God I can only hope that I meet her soon.

Well, I'm not gonna lie, the shock factor of knowing what actually happened in chapter 5 put me off a little bit, I like when people touch on heavy subjects, but I really don't like when things get that heavy. No fault on you for making it a part of your story, and it doesn't affect my overall thoughts on the story, but still.

All in all it's a very well written story. I liked the way you changed chapter 5, I like the way you hit real topics, I like the way you developed the conflicts, I like the way you developed the DDxMarie relationship.

I feel like you maybe should have had a bit more side characters though. Eddy and Ed are in the first chapter and then basically disappear. Them being the two best friends of DD, I would expect he would have told them about the thing with Kevin, or they would have at least talked to him after it happened. Just a thing to think about.

I like the story. I know that this is an old story, but in the off chance you do still keep track of old reviews, I just wanted to say that I thought.

will there be more?

I like this story

I really love it

If Edd was my kid in this situation. I would BEAT the Shit of Kevin to the point where he would have to go to the ER immediately! I'd also would END any of Kevin's cronies ! By the way RATT will continue in some way . Right now we're having to resolve longstanding legal issues. The RATT the world has come to know and love has ended forever indeed . I also would like to tell Mr. Morrison and MR. Pearcy that the battle for control of the name RATT is over. You two own the name because of a naming rights contract signed by you guys on March 16th 1975 . Bobby and the old lawyers completely lied to you both. I am also working on a new solo album.

While short and simple this story is well done and ended very well good job.

I love this!

Really nice little story I liked it

Awesome story.

i loved this. all of it. *wipes eyes* all of it

SO FLUFFY! SO CUTE I COULD MELTING FROM THIS ADORABLEST PAIRING! /