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I have no clue why you have only 100 or so reviews but this is one of my favourite fanfics and I have read a lot! Idk why you stopped writing at this part but you have to finish it!

Trully awesome...
u don't many times I have wished I could write something like this
If a producer I would make a movie out of this ... 3

This story is very interesting! Great skills you have, girl! Keep writing and update, don't let your talents go to waste!

nice

Wait soooo...do Sakura and Sasuke, like, LIKE each other? Or are they just really good friends? Or, like, what?

And btw...

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME THAT I JUST WANT TO KILL MYSELF! ...not really, actually. That would mean that I wouldn't get to read the rest lol. BUT I JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I AM ASTOUNDED BY THE QUALITY THAT IS THIS PIECE!

I'll stop doing caps now :)

But seriously, this was really, REALLY (oops, I lied) good. The writing is AMAZING. I LOVE how long the chapters are. The characters are...well, I'm simply blown away. You've developed the characters WONDERFULLY. You HAVE to love every one of them, because they all have their own sides to them. Each has their own reasons to why they're like how they are, and why they're doing what they're doing. A reader literally almost CAN'T wait to find out the next piece of information about a character that's going to be given out.

The "bad"/"evil" characters are eagerly anticipated, and the histories of each person are soaked up as fast as possible. Honestly, I've been trying to read parts of this story SO FAST that I've had to go back and read some part of it over again because I skipped like five words and only read like one word overall, trying to read it faster, faster, FASTER.

Most of what I WANT to be able to put into words about this story, I literally, HONESTLY CAN'T, because it's just...well, it's too amazing. How GREAT this is just CAN'T be put into words, because it's higher in writing and quality than I am. It's such a "higher being" than me that I can't form words to explain it.

Simply AMAZING/ASTOUNDING/AWESOME/UNIQUE/EVERY-GOOD-DESCRIPTIVE-WORD-IN-THE-UNIVERSE/GREAT job!

Scuze the laziness, but whether or not I am logged in doesn't matter all that much does it?

I looooveee this fic! It's so twisty-there's all these little hints that you just barely take note of before they all come together~

October 8, huh. I would have thought the Doomsday... Declaration? (sorry I left this for a while and came back only now to leave this.) would be on the 10th, if only for the sake of canon meaning, but whatever~ doesn't really matter (LOL if only the valley of the end had a date...).

Itachi and Naruto interactions are awesome as well... :3 I love itachi! He needs more love. One day people will see and convert to Itachism.

XD psychotic rant aside, I love how you really get into the relationships and the emotions behind their actions (which, as you said, was the point of the fic, so kudos to you!). And mysterious Naruto is a Naruto I love very much~ for some reason I dislike when it is the other way around. .

Anywayssss don't forget to join the worshipping; Itachism is just as awesome as Jashinism- but now with 100% less blood! (and good riddance, the blood drives were getting annoying.)

:P

Hopefully I havent lost you. Last thing, I was just wondering- whatever happened to the Utakata death that Fuu so rudely stole the space of?

-1412 karasu (I swear I exist! I dare you to message me... Just remember he code word and you will be fine.)

Loved it! That Sasuke and Naruto still have such strong feelings for each other is quite refreshing, what with all those stories where a character forgets their ex the moment they meet someone new, no matter the details of the breakup or the aftermath... I cant wait to find out more about the Doomsday Agreement! And more Kakashi please, as well as Sai! All in all, a thoughtfully informative chapter, tnank you.

Update soon! 3

You are seriously evil. This thing is eating me up inside.

What is going on (was going on & will be going on) between Sasuke & Naruto? TELL ME.

PLEASE. I can't even handle it anymore. I. Need. To. Know.

Please tell me you'll tell us soon. Really soon.

great job, cant believe sakura is becoming her own person lol

love it

I'm very curious about "the gruesome ending to his and Sasuke's relationship". That might help settle alot of what is happening between the 2 now, and is drawing their friends in with them.

love this story!

I have been browsing the ItaNaru channels for a while, looking for good stories, which I find unfortunately to be few and far between. Generally, I have to settle for lowering my standards and holding through a story by sheer willpower. I am overjoyed to be able to say this has not been the case with your story.

You're writing style is refreshing in it's attention to detail and the thought that has been put into the construction of your world. You attend to character development without losing sight of your plot and story-line. Each chapter is entertaining, suspenseful, and artfully expressed. You have clearly reconciled all past interactions with the psychological states of your characters. It is very well done.

As a member of the writing and publishing community, it is rare that I find authors of your caliber online anymore. So I have been so happy to have found you. Let me congratulate you on an absolutely splendid job and thank you for maintaining to seriousness that true fanfiction deserves. If you are ever in need of a beta or a commission work, please let me know. It would be an honor to work with you.

Lastly, I would like it to be made known that the two-faced bitch known as Konan had better get her ass handed to her on a silver platter for upsetting Itachi. Completely unacceptable. I mean, honestly, does she really think Pein could stand against such an overwhelming level of awesome as our dear Uchiha possesses? I think not.

Once again, it was a pleasure to read your story and I hope to see more from you soon.

Yours truly,

Shi Toyu; President and CEO of ShiToyu Inc, LLC.

whoa! so this ish how Sasuke and Naruto first meets O.O 3