Reviews for Coming of Age
lavenderslotus chapter 1 . 3/28
THIS WAS SO CUTE AND SWEET! I love the way you write all the characters; all the men getting drunk off their asses is something I could totally picture and it genuinely made me laugh. Loved it!
That one guy chapter 1 . 4/20/2019
Amazing love it!
zid95thanad chapter 1 . 1/30/2019
thank you so much for this story ...
I really love all of your stories of ed x winry (fma) and soul x maka (soul eater)... you're a very talented writer...
thank you again for all your wonderful stories...
SassnessOverlord chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
"But—Mustang," Ed complained, making the Brigadier snap his head to him woozily. "She's tellin' me to go to sleep! Make her stop, you wet-match stick!" he whined.
"Winry, as a...a..a..military officer I demand you to let Full Metal stay up as long as he likes!" he pulled rank, grabbing his badge by the fifth try and thrusting it to her as if that would stop her.
"I don't care if you're the Fuhrer of Amestris!" she growled, making both Ed and Mustang gasp dramatically.

Now, this was the golden part for me. Ed complains to Mustang and then thy both remember Hughes. I enjoyed a lot your story!
Thank you
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
Personally, I found Roy and Riza the best! Code Yellow! So funny! Whats code yellow anyway? They acted like kids! It was hilarious!
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
This story was freaking hilarious and the ending was great.
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Oh god, for Al's b-day there would be cats. Cats everywhere.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
justanotherdreamgirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Loved it! Just absolutely loved it! I really wish there was a story for when Al turned 18. Also, I can't count how many times I burst out laughing! I enjoyed this story a lot and I wish it didn't have to end. It has to be one of my favorites. I also loved the EdWin moments, and at the end when he finally did tell her he liked her.
starfingers chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
OH MY GOD you have just made my day. Watching them drunk is hilarious and Mustang yelling "CODE YELLOW 355F! (whatever that means)" couldn't be any funnier! The confession, both drunk and sober, is also cute.
Keep on writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Heh
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
good story
paracuties chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
LOLOL! I'm smiling so hard right now. And this was so sweet. Love the part Mustang plays in here, and especially love that point where he comes bursting out of the room screaming about how Riza has a gun. I find that especially hilarious, imagining it in my head... :P

Keep writing!
sempitavalon chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
...they had car insurance at the time? Otherwise...cool.
KaChan84 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
loved it :)
crimsontears82684 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
FMA guys all trashed and hilarious. Great story!
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