I kinda like to see Morgan’s reaction to Reid’s black eye and when he finds out that it was Hotch that put it there and fired him... I would like to be in Hotch’s shoes. After all we all know how protective he is of Reid as is the rest of the team. I was a bit disappointed to see that wasn’t in the story.

Wow, que tenso.
Por un momento me enoje en serio y me escribia en la historia para darle una paliza a Hotch por ser un idiota con Spencer

Truly loved this. You captured the characters so well. The encounter between Reid and his dad was heartbreaking. The only thing that didn’t fit well imo was Hotch striking Reid. That would be so out of character for him, unless perhaps he had been inebriated, which wasn’t the case. Otherwise, the whole thing was perfect. I so appreciate a well thought out story plot that displays character depth, instead of the all too frequent storylines of sexual assault and slash which I find revolting. Thank you for sharing this terrific story.

Wish there were more Reid and hotch friendship fics like this! Absolutely loved this, it was beautiful 3

Oh I love this story! Well done!

That was beautiful!

Such a lovely story! I just enjoyed it so much. The emotion was really perfect.

I liked the way your characters behaved towards each other. And Jack was great. Thank you ;)

Wow absolutely amazing and slightly heartbreaking story. I loved every part of it.

Wonderful fic! Nice job handing all the interactions, and it flows really nicely. I just love this fic!

I didn't see that there was more than one chapter. Yay!

Amazing

Amazing. I love this fic, from beginning to end. With all the humor, angst, and relationship issues.

I only have a problem with William Reid. Scum of the year award?

My only issue with this chapters I really do think William would be that much of an asshole. It seems like after memorial him that they had, some extent, had made peace with what happened when Spencer was younger. I don't think the Everbee the closest to father and sons, but it seem like William was proud of what Spencer is doing with his life, and obviously, didn't regret having him. I don't think he hates Spencer like he doesn't in this chapter.

Other than that, I like the story. I think it was a little unrealistic, but that's fanfiction, so who cares. Nope out of a job. Well written. Keep it up.

I ABSOLUTLY adored this story. Hotch seems a little out of charecter, but that's the only thing! Punctuation, Grammer, story line, everything is amazing!