| Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For |
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stevem1 chapter 1 . 7/13 This is a great introduction to a dark Harry after the war, though he does sound a bit childish here and there. Recommended. |
J flood chapter 1 . 5/26 you did well on the dark Harry aspect of this story I am impressed |
jlnorris75 chapter 1 . 5/5 I think you missed an opportunity for a little fun by having the lift mess with hermione a little bit either in this story or rise of the wizards |
mddomene chapter 1 . 4/24 Using 'this for speech' is bloody annowing, but it seems like a fun story. |
reddir chapter 1 . 4/16 I was directed in this direction after asking for recommendations of stories where what should be Harry’s natural dislike for abusive muggles can be seen. I am happy to see you wrote this so long ago, and that it has been available to the fan community all this time. I felt some of the Hermione and Dumbles moments were either lacking or drawn out... I am not a critic so can’t say exactly, except it might have been nice to have some forlorn response from Dumbles. Other than that, _of course_ Harry would like to see magical children protected. And also of course he would have zero regard for the non-magical world, just as Dumbles’ manipulations ensured. |
gabzep chapter 1 . 3/26 Love darkish Harry! |
RavenWolf9212 chapter 1 . 3/15 I like this! |
Cwhit930 chapter 1 . 1/18 I read this story before and I hope it’s the one I have been trying to find to read again. |
Alexander Von Einzbern chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 I have to say, HP here really is a bigoted man with God complex |
Gundam-Knight-Christofucker chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 "For those who do not already know, we're living in the last days; the times Jesus Christ warned about. All the issues going on is on a worldwide scale and its one of many proofs that these are the end times. If you know deep down in your heart this is true & you feel something is not right in the world... I highly encourage you to seek our father in heaven while he may be found and to come out of this world while there is still time. Like 1 John 2:17 indicates in the written word aka the bible: "The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever." Many people are too caught up and is focused on the wrong things in life thanks to all the distractions going on when they need to realize destruction & judgment is not too far away. Fleeing to other countries or protesting on the streets is not going to make things better or save you; it's the love of Christ and your faith. As long as your seeking Jesus Christ, you're gonna be okay. But if you're loving this life or is just so attached to this world... you're going to lose it. That is why I encourage you all to draw close to the father in heaven. You draw close to him and he will draw close to you. Do what you can to repent (turn away or stop doing it) of your sins. We all say & do things and stumble since we're imperfect creatures but if you sincerely go to the father in prayer and ask for forgiveness, he will forgive you; you just gotta mean what you say and repent. Nobody comes to the father but through the son. You deny the son and you deny the father. But if you accept the son then you have the father. It's by Jesus' blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven so you want to seek him in all your ways. The father in heaven knows the hearts & minds of all of us so he knows who you are deep down and what you've been through. He cares about you. When you open up your heart and allow the father & son in your life, they're gonna take you where you need to go but you gotta be willing to seek them for yourself. Nobody can build your relationship with Jesus Christ. It's up to you to read the bible for yourself & seek the truth; reading the word of god feeds the spirit, gives you knowledge and helps clears up the lies & deceptions of the world. Time is so very, very short since things are just escalating day-to-day. Don't allow the spirit of fear to overcome you. Just draw close to the father in prayer, let go of this dying world, repent and follow Jesus. Following Jesus Christ keeps one out of sin but it also separates you from this world and that's the direction you want to go; toward the son of the most high, our savior and redeemer. Take care and remember it's the love of Christ and your faith. Don't allow anyone or anything to hinder you. Forgive and let go since we all fall short. Chaos Control" Children of Critics United, Super Shadow 2018 and his friends are innocent. Look in your hearts. You know the truth. All of us wants what is best for this site. So why don't we work together? Won't a house divided fall easier? Chaos Control g1'm;13nt' |
1 love m4gic chapter 1 . 9/2/2019 Well...as Harry had quite a "gentle" personality in canon i find it a little unbelievable for him to change this much...that he was used and he is angry i accept, but it is bigotry to put all "muggles" under the same hat(its not him, he will not change this much just because he was used) just because a few idiots...i mean how many magicals are there? A few million? maybe? But there are 7 billion muggles...i dont really know what he means about the demise of the muggle world and with purely magical Earth. If he means he will kill every other human who is not magical thats just stupid, much more so if he means to abandon technology for pure magic...that would be stupid too. If he ruled and somehow made use of tech with magic htat would be cool...i hope this will go that way, and he will not hate non magical humans. |
ansaris chapter 1 . 8/11/2019 Fiddly fiddlesticks! Poo! I tell you, pii and poo! Now, where are my asylum committal papers? |
ZhaWarudo chapter 1 . 7/20/2019 I find it strange that after your claim of reading countless fics and rereading originals that you would write another bash fic with seemingly one dimensional characters. Maybe it's too early to tell so I'll move on to Rise of The Wizards. |
animeromance1972 chapter 1 . 7/1/2019 AWESOME! |