Seriously? In love! More chapters? :)

Ahhhhhhhhh! This is adorable. And I love it. Basically.

Please tell me that this isn't a one-shot... That there's more coming... It's a freaking amazing concept. And I'd love to know where it goes. Dude. So good.

Oh, I just love this! The beginning broke my heart, with Jess's letter and the the idea that he told her he loved her at Luke&Lorelai's wedding.

I really like the way you write Paris too and the advice she gave Rory. I can imagine her saying that stuff and I'm glad Rory listened. Jess's overprotective friend made me smile, because Jess deserves to have someone he can count on too.

And yay for the happy ending! I wanted to give Jess a hug when Rory had to leave again, but it's good that she reassured him. 3

Fantastic job!

I like this alot. It seems realistic to rory especially. Loooove.

Yay, you're back!

Truthfully, if it wasn't you, I probably wouldn't have read it just because this has been done so many times before. But you made it your own and I absolutely adore this.

There was one sentence here that blew my mind away. "He had pushed her boundaries without fundamentally changing who she was." You have basically summed up their relationship in one, concise, beautiful line. Kudos!

Paris is officially my hero after reading this. Despite being a total despot and neurotic, the girl is fantastic.

Crying Jess breaks my heart and I'm so glad Rory went to save him from that. Oh, and I love that Matt knew exactly what Jess was doing. It's great that he has people who know him.

Lovely work, my friend, and I'm waiting for more!

liked it.

First off, I'd like to say I made this face - :0 closely followed by this one - :D when I saw you had posted something!

This was fabulous. I mean it. The letter was perfect. Jess telling Rory he loved her at Luke&Lor's wedding *just* to tell her was heartbreaking.

Paris was epic. I love that girl!

But yes, brilliant, well done, welcome back, I'm incredibly jealous of Italia and can't wait for last chapter of IIWII!

Aw wow that was adorable. :D I love it. And wow, Italy sounds amazing lol! I can't wait for the last chapter of ITWIS - you know, it's ME so of course I can't wait. Also more Heroes from you would be amazing, so I certainly hope you can find it in you. :D Anyway I really enjoyed this. Cute and sweet and wonderful. Glad Jess decided to quit smoking by the way. And I assume you meant Dave was supposed to be "The one" for Lane? Because you wrote that they "settled" instead of waiting for the right people to come back lol... ;)