Such an interesting story! Carlisle is my favourite character and Carlisle/Bella is my favourite pairing, so I gotta admit it was tough for me to see him acting so vile! I loved your writing and the story though!

I don't think Bella's acting childish. I think she's been hit by an emotional tsunami. It started with the love of her life and her best friend cheating. Next her 2nd father figure hurt her, followed by her Dad arresting her and putting her where she couldn't get away from Edward This happening in days. I am pretty sure most people would need a little time. I think she's allowed to rant.

Nice Charlie. Let's see Bella's heart has been broken again by Edward, poster child for narcissism. Even better it happened on her wedding day. Yes he was worried about the bruise, but could he cut her a little slack, or would he preferb zombie Bella. Oh and to put the frosting on this insensitive punishment, he puts Edward where Bella is trapped and can't get away from his voice. Thought he was trying to keep her away from Eddie Sparklenuts. Really bright Charlie! Whoever thought Jake would be the thoughtful one. At least she has Jasper, Jake, and Angela.

Great story! Thank you for sharing.

So Amelia gets away with murdering Charlie?

I agree with the guest who asked if you were still checking on your reviews for this story. It's really frustrating when people don't finish their stories. This has been an awesome story and would love to find out what happens in the end! There should be more writers out there like you!

I totally saw that coming. I mean why else invite Angela on a trip they were taking to convince Bella to turn. When I first read that she was bringing her I was like, ok Jacob must be about to imprint on her because why else. I love it tho. It gets Jacob out the way so Jasper can make his move with out the pup throwing a fit.

Wonderful story though I was kinda hoping that there would be a chapter that was of bells dream of Monkey and banana come to life I would have loved that. Anyways I loved the story great work

Keep up the good work I enjoyed your story very much.

Good story, but the flow needs a little help. It was confusing the way the time seemed to go by with little ti no explanation.

It's great I wish I did not have to end there

Even though it was very sad how things turned out, but when Jasper said," How can I misinterpret you in bed with Alice? Naked. Did you trip and fall and in the process lost your clothes? Ha, I doubt it!" I laughed so hard I cried! You rock, chica!

This was truly an amazing epi. The story was interesting as well, but this epi sealed the deal. Very touching moment you created with the video idea. wonderful job.

Fantastic story. I really enjoyed it. Sorry about not reviewing previous chapters but I was too anxious to get to the next chapter to slow down long enough to write anything. Thank you for a great read.

Absolutely Amazing story I loved it !