please contuine this story as I have fallen in love with this story

Reading this just made my day umm early morning! :)

Oh. My. God. This story . . . It's perfect. It's been so long since I've read a story that's connected me this much to an OC and made me laugh as much as yours has. This story is the best thing and I hope you update soon!

I see you haven't updated this on a while and I just wanted to try my hand at maybe persuading you into continuing on with the story? I really like it, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. I'd like to see where this story goes, and I think it's really fantastic. You've got an amazingly unique writing style, and it's almost scary how much your OC is like me. Haha, but you've done really well and I just wish you'd continue with it! Please think about continuing? Great job on what you do have! :)

Moar for our faces?

love

I'm going to just go ahead and lay out some criticism on this one.

I could hardly finish the first chapter. Normally, I try and read all the chapters and then give my opinion but I can't with this one. The thought process was all over the place and it made it hard to follow. I know how kids like to be "random" and think it's cute but in most situations it's just hard for the reader.

And the fact that your self-insert, just some random civilian in the main character's eyes, can join up with Shepard's troop doesn't make sense, especially since they're a high ranking military group. Or that even though she knows nothing about weapons she automatically knows her way around a gun.

Regardless, It's your fanfiction and you have the choice of writing it in whatever way you like.

Awesome! This fic is brilliant, at you had me hooked at the first paragraph in the first chapter, and I’ve been giggling away all evening at it, nice to see a SI when the character is not a whiny moron/supergod but tags along effectively and interacts with the crew (which is to be honest the reason we buy RPG’s, the death and destruction dancing around are just bonuses.) I have to give this a 10/10 for the fic and look forward to the next chapter. No complaints one bit!

pleaseeee continue.

Im reading this and im like,"oh hell yea! finally a good story to read!"

XD You will be my hero haha.

Woah. A bit...manic, I think is the word.

followed from an authors note Rec from Herr Wozzeck. good thing. This is going on my watch list. Update soon, please.

Wow, best Mass Effect fic I have read so far. It's fun, somewhat crazy, doesn't go overboard with the characters knowledge and you actually focus on the characters instead of just going with the MassEffect plot and tech. Love your characters personality too, sounds like a really interesting girl to chat with, something few authors manage for their OCs. in my opinion at least)

Really hope you will continue writing this story, looking forward to more.

Your story is absolutely fantastic! Definitely stands apart from the usual fanfics! I was sad to see it hadn't been updated in some time...I hope you haven't given up on it...would love to read more...it's been a great ride!

Thanks!

I LOVE it! D It's so cool. T.T Then I look at the date. Not gonna update are you?

omg i swear you better update this story! its funny and hilarious and i havent laughed so hard reading a story in a loooong time. it was refreshing. i hope you work on it some more. i reeeeally love this story. xD and yeah, i read this story AGAIN cuz it was plain awesome. xD and aww, we cant have like, alter-ego inside one body? i would be the calm side xD (maybe. or just the bat-shit crazy side? i dun know... hm... ima have to think about that one.) BUT OMG PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER! ITS KILLIN ME NOT KNOWING WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT! D: *hugs* anyways... im done ranting... for now. i may return later... mwuahahahaha xD (dont know why but i reeeeally wanted to do that. X3 )

lol! Your brilliant! I don't know how you managed to pull this off its simply amazing! I'm so amused with her character that I actually chocked when she was messing with Garrus. She's so random and I love it! All these things you think about when you play the game and how great it would be to just annoy the hell out of these people... I'm so glad you did it! I really, really, really, reeeeaaallly, enjoy your writing!

I am really enjoying this story. It makes me cry with laughter at points, and just giggle like an idiot. I really hope you continue this. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Ai