love it!

Hee :D

I know it's been ages since you wrote this story but who cares; I like it :)

I like how you described McGee's reaction to Ziva's scars; they're usually written from Tony or Ziva's own POV, and it's refreshing to read about it from another perspective.

You are very good at characterization! I could just see them and hear them.

And I do especially love the last two paragraphs :D

~Soph

I found this story on another author's favourites and fell in love with it.

I LOVE how Tony saw nothing unusual and McGee only saw scars. Great writing. I'm off to read the rest of your work. Just brilliant.

Thank you so much for sharing! )

This was cute. Great job.

Really good! Liked it )

beautiful. i love the writing style. the subject matter, their reactions, thoughts. i like it.

Excellent! Loved it Kit! More more more please! I can never get enough of your beautiful fics

As always, great job. I look forward to more similar stories and one shots.

Congrats on the licience.

I loved it. McGee is very in character.

such a cute story! love it :) xx

Hmmm, indeed! Love it!

adorable :D

I like it, though I do have a question. Two really.

1) Why didn't Tony see them?

2) How could they license you as a driver? Did Ziva or Gibbs teach you to drive?

Me likey! I love Tim's perspective on things!

Man, I'm a sucker for POV fics! Good every time! (Well, not really, but yours is excellent!) This line slayed me: "...perhaps it's been a while since McGee's seen women's undergarments..." It's your choice of the word "undergarments' that makes it art.

A very believable happening and good reveal, because of course Tony wouldn't note the scars since he's so used to them. Wonderful job! :)