| Reviews for The Visitor |
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   Love2read23 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 Awww, the explanation would be nice. Great so far tho. Thanks for writing. |
| eve chapter 1 . 1/8/2012 how is this complete? T.T |
| eve chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 complete? |
| Vindeen chapter 1 . 7/31/2010 Me like ) |
| kls12 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 I really liked this story. I hope you tell the story behind Harry's change. :) |
| A chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 very, very, very short. |
| StarDuchess chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 Changing the hair and skin and adding wings all made it NOT Harry so it didn't really work for the competition. I think we were all looking for the Veela bit to add a little more immediate action to the short plots rather than be background information, which is what it is here. I agree with Helsky that this sounds like the beginning of a much longer tale that has a prologue with how Harry got here and a continuation with what Severus is going to do about it. |
| Heksy chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 And of course our darling Keppiehed is going to follow up on this one and make it a decent story...right? RIGHT? *superduper-deluxe-ultra-high mode-pleading-look* |
