Very good!

So damn good, the story flows very smoothly without any corniness, well done

Interesting concept

This is so damn good! It was funny, awkward, and quirky at first, and then suddenly sexy and playful, and finally poignant and sweet. Amazing writing! I love this so much. Thank you for sharing!

Here I thought I finally thought of something original, having drells molt, but you beat me to it!

I like the awkwardness! Seems like fic authors tend to treat the aliens like they're humans dressed up in costumes. This was a refreshing change.

Well, first I want to say that this is really exceptionally written and thought out. *applauds* SO ALL YOU JOKERS THAT READ REVIEWS FIRST WONDERING IF THIS IS WORTH IT - IT IS.

You also really nailed every character personality quite well and threw in lots of details that really added a depth to this that is so often missing in fanfiction. This adds a bit of most plausible ecology to the depressingly barren knowledge about the drell. (I must admit, shedding was one of the first things I thought of when meeting Thane - it would be a really moot point if your super-secret assassin was leaving bits of DNA all over a murder scene.) And yet you've also apparently taken that into account and explained why it wouldn't interfere with being , you know, an *assassin*. So, great planning and forethought! *applauds, again*

Also, I loved the parts with Mordin, especially when poor Thane got The Talk. XD Oh gawd that cracked me up. I really laughed when Mordin handed over the bottle - the idea of this scientist solarian buying hack remedies for something he (self-admittedly) knows extremely little about is priceless!

So anyway! You're a very talented writer and I hope you keep on writing, because this was quite a pleasure to read. _ The ending was perfect - it couldn't have ended better! My ONLY crit for this is that I got a bit thrown off by Shephard's first name, but it's really a trivial thing.

P.S. pruny drell fingers made me lol for some reason. :P

110% satisfied customer! *melt* thank you so much 3

your story sounds like it was written by one of the real mass effect authors. O.O

it's amazing how accurate you describe thane, his inner thoughts and even his condition... i assume u made up and wasn't explained bevor in any official book (i wouldn't know, i haven't read one) but even thinking that way proves how greeeeat your imagination is. wow. there is only one more chapter and i'm really hoping there will be a conclusion i'm satisfied with, if not... I DEMAND MORE! haha kidding

anyway, in love with your fic so far, thank you :D

So sweet and yum!

Aww that was so cute!

I loved it! It's a scene I really could see happening on the ship :3

Your fiction is just great !

It feels like you've known drells biology forever. Maybe it's because of my poor english (not my native language, unfortunately) but I kind of read several double meanings at some points which made me smilling.

But the most important of all, it is the way you succeed in making all of that sexy. Congratulations, because I would never have imagines that someone sloughing its skin could be that...interesting !

Awwwwww! Heart-melting fluffiness! Thank you for making my day!

I've kept reptiles (bearded dragons) for 7 years now. I've bred them for 3 of those years. Of all the fanfiction, of all the discussion about molting/shedding you are the only person I've seen who got it scientifically correct.

Ecdysis. With all its symptoms.

And I love ya for it!

The sexy side effects for Thane were truly creative and a very fun twist. Also, the vulnerability was a nice touch. This was one of the best stories I've read so far! I hope to see many more from you in the future!

WOW! I didn't think it possible for the second chapter to beat the first! But you proved me wrong! This story is fantastic! YOU should be proud! 3 3 3