There's a real passion and sadness in this. It's almost tough to read, honestly.

Amazing job.

This story was so sad ;( but the rogue Pikachu searching for new adventures and cherishing old memories was definitely me favourite line :') like a reviewer said that you maybe mashed the worlds together and that blue was blastoise red was charizard blah blah but really I found this story sad as I said and heart wrenching and Red died DX ;(

Wow, I feel kind of emotional reading this, then again I have just read two creepypastas before this story.

That is just so darn SADDD. But I love it. LIKE, A LOT. Kudos to you, mate.

Thank you, for writing this.

This fic was really heart-wrenching, but had a sort of bitter-sweet taste to it.

Pokemon out-living their trainers kind of makes sense, and it's sad that they may live through seeing the humans they loved die.

This was stunning in its brevity. I really, really liked it. At first I wasn't sure how I felt about only using pronouns, but I since it was so clear which Pokemon was which, I grew used to it.

i liked this very much; the mood, the style, all of it. although i would've liked a little less vagueness on which pokémon was which (although i can guess), the idea alone of this oneshot is unique; i've noticed after reading a few of your works is that you like speculating the aftermath of Red's death, and what would happen then. again, very well done.

author fave! :D

(ummm so to me it looks like u switch in between the anime and manga canon- there are certain things i've only seen in the anime, and others that definitely only happened in the manga, as a pattern in your works. so i can only guess that the blue was blastoise, the red was charizard, the green was ivysaur, the purple was espeon, the "black" (more like dark blue, but w/e) was snorlax, and of course pikachu was pikachu. did i guess right? it's only confusing because of course Red never owned Blastoise, though he did have the chance to take care of Green's Charizard once- Ash, on the other hand, had Pikachu and all three starters in his group. but Ash did not have Espeon, whereas Red evolved his messed-up Eevee in a later arc. so i can only guess that you meshed the two worlds together, that or my guessing was totally off ._.)

THAT'S SO SAD! You nearly made me cry... *Sniffle*

That was really good and inspiring, I loved it!

*cries like a baby*

the rogue pikachu is hilarious but i think that it ruins the mood...

*cries more*

Really great story.

It was really sad too.

SO... SO... *breaks down crying in a cartoon like fashion* SAD!

-cries- That was so sweet, even though he died, and so SAD...

The writing was not the best, I have to say. It's hard to put into words exactly how so, but it could use improvement. Good job though, keep writing! -