I dunno if you’ll read this six years later but I greatly enjoyed this story, I tried doing my own spin on it but I’m just not good enough by my own standards. I understand why you never continued but I still would have loved to know the rest, even if I feel the story would now be less naruto senpai and more regular naruto. Anywho, dunno if anyone will even read this but still, great read

good story, I hope you continue, greetings, good luck with your lesson, which by now you have cured hehe, see you, bye!

Shame you stopped writing the story

"...all the rookie 12 are 12..." in this fic?
Since team Gai are late 13 early 14 year olds by the time we met them in the canonical series...

Is it me or is there a lot of knnuendos in this story?

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
My idea, is to do a "shippuden" version of it. Like, Naruto do that special training for 3 years, and then resume what happened in those years with then... and lots of romance xP

I WANNA CRY.
NO ONE CONTINUE THE STORY.
WHY? :(

Awwww, its so sad you stopped this. I think the creators are always harder on themselves and their creations than the audience who enjoys them. Honestly, there has been many good moments and i didnt notice any 'badly written' bits at all. I wish you would continue this story, or at least point me towards others like it because i like the relationship between naruto and hinata in this story. You stuck to their characters well (although you upgraded naruto's character a little bit to account for his slightly different history, with him being a sempai and all). The story always felt enjoyable whilst simulateously making me look forward to the future possibilities - i always had this sense while reading it that something awesome was going to develop. That is, however simple or nondramatic, i felt like their relationship and training sessions would begin changing in an awesome way the more they began to notice each other romantically. Seriously, SO much potential there.

your Naruto reminds me of Doctor Who I keep expecting him to pull out a seal screwdriver.

First story in years I've read that happens to be a Hinata fic, and I actually enjoy it. Kudo's to you.

Missing many periods when the characters speak but otherwise I think it's wonderful so far.

That first chapter, when naruto first enters the classroom, it is almost an EXACT copy of The Doctor in School reunion. I recognized that little scene right away! I will admit, though, that is probably how Naruto would act as a teacher

Too right you mean readers... I'm an Overlord, not a minion. Then again, in a way, all authors are overlords...

Ouch. I've enjoyed the story immensely so it's a shame you refused to continue it. Granted, this is probably because this is the first Hinata-centric story I've read that rationally helps her improve her skills and mentality in a reasonable pace. Most of those character development fics often centers around the people in Team Seven, specifically Naruto and/or Sakura. I also liked the twist of Naruto being a senpai despite his age, the possible changes that might have occurred in his absence in the Academy and how he directly influences Hinata. Also, Sasuke. Nice to see he isn't a douche bag.

Hmmm, the unintended grammatical errors were hilariously memorable. No offense meant. It just took me minutes before I realized Machinate and Narrator is actually Hinata and Naruto. Silly me. It took me by surprise that I couldn't help but be amused.

Glad that you shared this with us though. I really hope people would be inspired with this idea and spin their own twists on the plot. The more the merrier.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA! His entrance of saying Chakra Control was just like the Doctors in School Reunion of Doctor Who! I lOVED it!