I have been binge reading Halice fanfics all week and this is one of my most favorites! I checked for Bringing Back The Magic, but I'm assuming it's not finished yet! I hope you still plan to write it!

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Tear jerker fluff.

"I had a tough time with this one, I'm not sure it's got good flow. But I don't know what else to do with it, so I submit it for your suggestions and comments. Thanks!"
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I think it's perfect. Loved every bit of it. you capture them so well.

Loved it. Would have lived to see the sequel mentioned.

I like the closure Alice gets with her grandmother. And that she notices how Hatter has made Alice blossom.

I love that she tells him about flying the flamingo.

I'm only about halfway through the story, but I've definitely enjoyed it so far!

OMH, THAT WAS AMAZING, I love, love, love it, fantastic job, really really really can't wait for more, poor Carol is going to be beside herself with worry, will she get Charlie to take her to Wonderland with him so that she can see if their ok, can't wait to find out what happens next, love that Charlie was able to make it, I nearly cried, and Hatter is just so adorable, please update with the sequel soon, I NEED IT. hehe.

hehe, this is one of the cutest proposals I've ever read, really really love it, love when he said '"Well, now it's official," he grinned. "Though, really, you were mine since I bought you from Ratty."' lol, fantastic, really great job.

I wonder how old he really is, great job love it.

this is so adorable, love that he gave three of the rings back, n then still won so easily, hehe, and it was so cute how he gave the prize to the little girl like that, he's so, so sweet, love it, fantastic job.

I love it, it's wonderful, fantastic job.

aawww poor Hatter, how could his mother just leave him like that, he was just a little kid, so sad.

aawwwww their so cute, love it, brilliant job.