Wow. This is so sad :( There are those people in the world,and the children are so strong. :( *cries*

this is sad. I am crying right now.I listened to the ARE a tresure and they DO need to be kept safe.

Really nice story... it was so sad, though. Isabel gives me nightmares... And yes, child abuse should be stopped. Everyone deserves life.

i watched the video of concrete angel and i could not stop crying. it was so sad that the girl died. and if you put your story peace and the song to gether it gets so sad. you should make it a songfic! (/_)

OMG! This was a very nice and sad story. If you can make a sequel of Ian being abused by Isabel and vikram but finally saved by Amy. But it was very good.(/_).

Sad...But,it is good, .Pie.

That is just sad u should do more chapters

Down with child abuse! Argh!

No wonder Natalie is like that, her mother needs to be in a secure, locked, padded sell (badly, quickest possible).

You should wright a story were Ian runs away.

WAHHHHHhHHHhHHHHhH! This story's SO sad! Major tear jerker! It's sad to say tht this happens everyday! I'm so glad u also strongly believe child abuse is wrong! Great story! U should do like an epiloge or something!

I can't even listen to "Concrete Angel" without crying . . . but it is an important message to get across. The 39 Clues series was not written to be this dark, but it definitely has some potential.

On a different note, it's nice to see a Natalie less spoiled and stuck-up than how some people describe her - I rather like this character. Your story evokes sympathy for Natalie.

The only detail that really bothers me is that she is perhaps a bit too lacking in arrogance, but it's understandable. It's also sad when the only way a person can find peace is through death, and we can only hope that they really are being sent off to a 'better place'.

WAAAAAAAAHHHH! I cried so hard...

wow, I can actually imagine her like that. great job!

Oh...that was so sad! And really dark too. Though I didn't cry.

I personally thought Natalie was a little OOC. And Isabel...*shudders* I could totally believe that she'd do that. She's so cruel!

Anyways, nice story! Too bad you can't enter it into the Tearjerker contest, because you created that contest... But still, I think this fanfic is the most sad out of all the other entries! Good job.

. . . It made me cry. Now THAT'S a sad story. Are you gonna enter your own contest?

~~*Little Lobster*~~

Natalie's dead? Shame :'((