Hermione might not like it but I'm sure going to fantasize about it later. Lol

Oh Hermoine, you may not want this, but I surely do! X3

So is Hermione being held captive or what?

I know you wrote this a year ago, but I only read it just now and decided that a very late review is better than none. For someone who doesn't like Bellamione, or femslash with Hermione at all, you did a great job writing this. I hope you decide to do more with this pairing, especially to show how they got into this kind of situation in the first place. It's obvious that this isn't the first time this has happened, and that Hermione doesn't seem to enjoy it, so why go through this?

Fantastic, I love how she kept asking the questions.

Very dark, but very well written! Thanks for sharing!

Sorry for the belated review, WF. I'm catching up to my VDay entries, *lol*.

I'll admit, femmeslash isn't my favorite thing. However, that doesn't color my opinion of how well you used the quote.

It wasn't forced and it didn't appear out of the blue. Bella slipped it in as if it were nothing and the dialogue still came off as both of them remaining in character, which I think is hard to accomplish in femmeslash.

Really excellent use of the quote!

-mew! :)

Intense... there is something between the lines... something dark... I like the Bella who takes advantage of Hermione. Its always somewhat cruel and evil. Well done.

hey there... this is really a good story and its very good enough to be continued XP

since you don't really Hermione being paired up with a girl so i guess that won't happen but nonetheless... it is really good so thanks for sharing _

Interesting One-shot!

I thought "Bellamione" sounded cooler :-)