| Reviews for Expelled from the Garden of Eden |
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  caraway seed chapter 1 . 8/9/2012 I just came across this, very belatedly. What a good story! I like Eric's admiration for Michaelangelo, and am amused that the woman who fascinated him was named Susannah. Very well written- thank you! |
 MsEllie chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 What a fantastic read!Thank you... |
| Brytte Mystere chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 Ohhh, Poooor Susan! |
| Eric21468 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011 Such an excellent story |
| Sleepy Lotus chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 excellent historical fic with eric, i loved the symbolism of being expelled from the garden. also, eric's complete irreverence in feeding upon the "pious" in the beginning was so very dead on, i'm sure he'd take great pleasure in such an irony. and i think you captured michelangelo's personality very well! crazed, cranky, devoted. i was just in florence a couple months ago, and couldn't help but think of eric northman while walking around the David with my mouth hanging open. lol. great job! |
| tvgirlSVM chapter 1 . 8/20/2010 As I started reading I thought maybe you'd make Eric model for David. *giggles* But I don't think David's GP is big enough for it to have been Eric. LOL. And I didn't realize he Michaelangelo did David before the Sistine Chapel. Great idea to insert Eric (and kinda Sookie) into such an amazing piece of artwork. |
| Northwoman chapter 1 . 8/14/2010 Sample fic - but it is lovely. Thank you. |
| zeewriter chapter 1 . 8/13/2010 ohhh, now if only the sistine chapel was really created this way it would be a much better histry. :) lovely darling, just lovely. |
| luvvamps chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 Great! |
| evenflo78 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Oh god, I know this is just a sample fic, but it's so beautiful and makes me skeered to post mine! Lovely, wonderful breathtaking job, I felt like I was right ther with them. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing! |
| s.meadows chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 Amazing! The fic and the website! I'm so moved by both! The feeling of longing was wonderful. Genius way to make Eric and Sookie (Suzanna) a significant part of history. |
| Kellmeister chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 This is going to be a tough contest. Very beautiful story! Best of luck. |
| ljhjelm49 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 Wonderful! |
| mischievousmaya chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 *hugs* This was an incredible story - you wove a beautiful tapestry of history, imagery and contemporary characters into a fantastic piece of art. You really did an amazing job with this. It captured my imagination from the very start and I was swept into your world from the first sentence. You're such a talented story-teller, Mare! *hugs you again* Ps. Just in case you weren't clear... I totes love this story! |
| BrooklynCali chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 Great job! Such an interesting read! |
