| Reviews for The Unlocked Window |
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   DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 INCREDIBLE |
| lovin sasunaru chapter 1 . 11/11/2013 I love this story |
| sugardash chapter 1 . 6/6/2013 Totally love this! |
| She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 3/4/2012 ... He's a cop and he's making it a regular pass-time to break into his neighbors' apartments? Okay... Other than that: Nicely done. The sex was short but not bad. |
| Buchinchin chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 wow, i love this! PLEASEE MAKE A SEQUELL, show 'em fckers how it's done :]] |
| Blossom Utonium chapter 1 . 9/18/2011 Haha! xD LOVED it, great job :D |
| KagomeGirl021 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 ooh this was good. you should so write a sequel with sasuke and naruto showing the couple naruto complained about how its really done. maybe naruto could even wear that frilly apron and be handcuffed to sasuke's liking. i mean naruto went to the trouble of leaving the sex toys under sasuke's bed so why not put them to good use lol. i would love to see naruto in a cute maid's uniform and also see sakura's reaction when naruto drops by sasuke's work place asking for his boyfriend. a good romp in the office would be fun too especially if u have a fangirl like sakura walk in on them. |
| twitchybear94 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011 I really liked this... Haha you should write a sequel where Sasuke and Naruto battle the couple above Naruto's apartment for who's louder! Lol |
| DaringAyako chapter 1 . 12/18/2010 Sasuke made a flying leap-tackle . .time. :3 loved the outrageous plot! |
| 666snoopy chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Awesome, show those neighbors just how loud you guys can be. Great job! |
| Fumetsu Kaji chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 Cute and sexy. I really enjoyed it. Loved some of the comedy that you put into it. |
| KappuuChuu chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 okay police officer? lol and sasuke doesn't find it strange that a police officer is breaking in to an apartment to steal sex toys and then breaks in to an other apartment to hide them? lol XD |
| lovelessbitch666 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010 I loved it! Horny Sasuke XD You did a great job and hope you write lots more |
| kikyotwosoul chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 This could defintly have more added to it. I really would like that. oh oh and a face off between the upstairs and the down stairs. They could be someone unexpected, like Matt and Mello. (giggles) Sex without foreplay is like pizza without breadsticks. Or an anime without the overly loud character. Or...you get the point. I like it though. it made me giggle...and it's every girls dream to have Sasuke horny. |
| menolikey chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 haha! i really enjoyed your first chapter! It's one of those different ones that seem to be on a unconsciencely, naturally higher level. It don't matter what genre this is, lemon (which wasn't bad at all) or not, this story is brilliant. Have some confidence in you! Thank you for writing this. I'm glad you took the time to give us this. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter! |
