| Reviews for Dares |
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Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Oh so sweet thanks for very good read |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012 "Well," he said, tearing his eyes away from her, "I think you made your point," take that Patrick Jane cute story |
Cat1030 chapter 1 . 12/24/2011 Really enjoyed it :D |
xxEternityxx chapter 1 . 8/19/2011 Random, maybe but... Who could pass up a Jisbon kiss? :D Really enjoyed this story(since we don't have any kisses on the show, I'm glad to see some in writing here!)! xxEternityxx(Sofie). |
AngelOfDeath07 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010 Lol. Jane always does get his own way, even when it comes to kissing Lisbon :D Good job Deanie |
Tempe4Booth chapter 1 . 7/23/2010 LMAO LMAO |
Ab55556 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 Oh, even the quote in the summary made me laugh :p This is just brilliant, yet another fantastic oneshot idea that I'm so so glad you got round to doing! :D It makes me grin just thinking about how they even got round to playing dares, that must have taken a lot of Jane persuasion! I win," he grinned at her childishly, "Now, you blatantly don't want to make this so called point, so I might just leave..." Perfect Jane ending to that little banter section, I loved it! "from teasing and light to intense and serious in just a few seconds." Great description there, and I'm glad it ended that way because it showed how much the kiss meant to her, and the ending was so funny, so Jane, trust him to try and break the ice, I loved it, really did! Great work again! |
OutCold chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 Ah, I ADORE your random oneshots. I really do. It's not OOC, it is predictable, from the title, but so good that I don't care, and no one could write it like you can. Love the dialogue, about her proving a point, it's just hilarious, and her begging for ANY other dare... oh, Lisbon makes me laugh. "I'm hurt Lisbon, really, I am, I didn't think I was that bad," Lmao. I really want a lmao smiley for reviews! That is brilliant, so Jane. Though he's more on the mark with his later theory that she's overwhelmed by desire for him. :P I love the little argument over whether he wants it or she wants it. You both do, idiots! I notice, unlike the Hightower situation, he doesn't actually deny that it's about him. :P Of course a kiss was going to change the atmosphere! Honestly, they can be such idiots. But your last line was priceless, hilarious. So Jane. I love this, made me grin from ear to ear. xx |
krolinette chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 Nice :) |
AirborneGirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2010 Well, it does scream sequel. So, please write one. Please? |
dammitspawk chapter 1 . 7/18/2010 That was cute, I'm not gonna lie :) lilaclila |
Jisbon4ever chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 I liked it, it was really funny. Love the Jisbon banter! "I win," he grinned at her childishly, "Now, you blatantly don't want to make this so called point, so I might just leave..." "No, I'm still making my point." She glared at him again, "I think you're doing this because you want it," she told him. "No, I'm doing this because it's one of the things you'd least like to do, because it's so, 'unprofessional', I just think you don't want to kiss me, because you'd no longer be able to control the suppressed urges and desires you have around me," he grinned, he was so getting it in the neck now. She slapped him on the arm and her mouth formed a round 'o' as she glared at him. "Fine, I'll do it, just to prove I have no problem of that sort whatsoever, I think that you're making this about ME when actually it's about you," she told him, pleased with her observations.-They should really both stop dancing around it and do it already. Like my friend Cho likes to say; Idiots! LOL |
Frogster chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 Wish dares like this happened more often...o.O |
lisbon69 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 MORE! aweeoms! |
Lisbon94 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 Yes Random...but AWESOME! :D loved it :) Typical arguementative Jane :) It was great! :)) |