| Reviews for Sympathetic Intervention |
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   theo.tomingas.naf chapter 2 . 3/15/2019 Continue this story and make sure that both Hermione, Ariana and all other girls except Ginny becomes Harry’s wives please. |
| Winter Queen15 chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 Now this is the kind of story that i wanted yok read for some time. But i woul have loved a more detailed one. |
| myflyingbroomstick chapter 2 . 3/19/2017 Interesting and heart wrenching fic! But the thing is...if Albus didn't have to stay in Godric's Hollow, he should be with Elphias on their world tour, not giving him the opportunity to meet Grindelwald. I know this is totally fanfic, but why did Albus end up on the dark side? Why couldn't he be good? Don't take this as me complaining, I'm just curious. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2016 Loved this! A wonderful and original what-if scenario! |
| HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 2 . 1/29/2016 Delightful! I loved how you told how the timeline changed and also keep us aware of the present using such few words. You also had her watch over the at-risk children, Sev create (a no doubt BETTER) lycanthropy potion, and everyone in the present going to their proper house. I also enjoyed how at the end you finished with the same phrase as the chapter before. THIS is the ULTIMATE in fix-it fics I've seen so far. THANK YOU FOR SHARING! |
| q.thews chapter 2 . 8/18/2013 I didn't notice the second chapter and wrote this before noticing there was something more: "Beautiful, but it make me wonder how a mind and a power like Albus' one would react with someone better than him everywhere he go, would he go for politics ? Would he still be a teacher ? Would he turn dark ?" ;-) Great story, how that powerful duo was defeated would be a good idea for a full novel length fic (and her full life too). |
| envirosue chapter 2 . 8/12/2013 Very cool idea and well written. Thank you! |
| fhl1234 chapter 2 . 7/30/2013 Beautiful :) |
| Birooksun chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 This is fantastic! |
| Susan M. M chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 Interesting |
| Madhatter1981 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 Good story, while we really don't know much about Arianna other than what we learn in the last book this seems plausible. Mad. |
| ManaTheWeirdOne chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 I like it :) |
| Dessert Maniac chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 Very nicely done! :) |
| Dr8gn chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 really cool i hope u wrote a sequel hope hope hope |
| ArtThouStupid chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 Wow, I have never read a story like this before. Extremely well done; I can honestly say I wasn't expecting half of what went on in this, especially for such a short story. I particularly liked the way Harry came into the past, with the twinkles etc. XD |
