Update more pls xxx

Update pls xxx

Awww this is my fav glee fanfic! U r amazing writer xx

Love this

This is literally just perfect.

I've never seen Glee, so I didn't know anything about Quinn and Puck when I started reading this, but you really made me feel for them. You described Quinn's feelings beautifully: she seemed so human, so vulnerable as she tried to resist her attraction to Puck, and yet she kept falling into his arms. I liked how insignificant you make the event seem at the very beginning, and yet how it keeps happening, over and over again, and how you gradually show that their relationship becomes more and more important, it becomes all about Puck, until it's the fear of losing Puck and not Finn that's keeping her from breaking up. The intensity of their feelings was very well conveyed. I loved your portrayal of Puck as well, he seemed so very strong, as in he handled it, he handled everything – he wanted her, and so he took her, although they had to hide, although she wouldn't be his, although she kept pushing him away at first. And yet it did eat at him, and eventually he needed to be with her… His suffering wasn't directly shown as the whole fic was from Quinn's point of view, and yet somehow you really got it to come across. Really good job, very well handled!

Nice :)

One of the best one-shots I've ever read, thank you so much for writing it :)

I have to admit, I don't know much about Glee, and from what I've seen, I don't particularly like Quinn, but I really think this is a wonderful peace. Their relationship is just so delightfully complex.

Simply amazing!

Great story and wonderful writing! I would love for you to write more puck and quinn. I think it did not lack anything from not having the pregnancy - i preferred it in fact.

I found a few grammatical errors:

Lampse: is it a word? I'm not sure if you are meaning to say something else, and just spelt it wrong, or if it's a word I don't know about

Absolutely is spelt wrong.

But other than that it was great! :) I like the way you have done the whole 'Third time,' ect when explaining it. Good job!

You have painted a very clear portrait of Quinn and Puck; makes me wish the show went this way ;) (I had mixed feelings about the baby plot last season)

Your dialogue is beautifully in-character, and the development of Quinn's feelings for Puck over time is lovely. Great job, I really enjoyed it.

What a beautiful story! I just adore this pairing, and this was a wonderful AU, in character version of it. The chemistry between your Quinn and Puck is so vivid; I can completely understand the attraction. And your fragmented style worked perfectly - there was something so fluid in the individual sentences that were a gorgeous contrast. Loved this.

I'm new to Glee, but I've got a basic understanding of the series. This is really cute, for starters, and I think you captured the characters very well. I love how it's snippets of conversation and dialouge and action-always implied, very tasteful-and the fact that the characters draw closer together and simultaneously pull apart is really quite good. It really sells the Glee and the high school experience as a whole.

Fantastic job!

This is perfect!

You nail both Quinn and Puck so squarely that if I didn't know better I'd think it was your name in the credits. XD

This is absolutly adorable and made me grin like an idiot. You capture the high school atmosphere and giddiness of a secret relationship really well.

I was a bit of a Q/P shipper before but after this I'm all about Finnwho? XD

Great job!