| Reviews for Haruhi's Pain |
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Lyn.Rajivkahr chapter 7 . 4/20 Okay I'm sorry but I really can't take this. I really wish people would put up a disclaimer or warning if they're going to use so many Japanese words. Its so confusing and unnecessary, to switch between english and Japanese. I always 'imagine' they are talking in Japanese not English anyway. I just think it disrupts the flow of a story and gets old fast. your story may be interesting, but I just can't read this. It's like denglish to me (denglish is a weird mix of english and german/Deutsch. So people using the languages at the same time.) And that really ain't it for me queen. |
Caffii chapter 17 . 10/15/2019 More... T-T |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2019 I like the format of this |
Bard of Innail chapter 17 . 1/25/2018 It's a real shame you let this fall to the wayside. The piece is really good. Intriguing, characters aren't too out of the norm for the most part. You situations are a little forced, I'll admit, and Haruhi is not reacting like a person would in her situation making suspension of disbelief a little harder to achieve, but all in all, I was enjoying reading it. |
Anonymous chapter 3 . 8/7/2017 Oh my lord this was so awkward for me, I have an on OC called Hiroki and I just pictured him and I was like "Oh hell no!" |
dynamitestars chapter 14 . 8/8/2016 AUTHOR-SAN I WANT HIROKI BACK! IM SORRY TAKASHI BUT I NEED HARUHI AND HIROKI TO BE TOGETHER |
dynamitestars chapter 11 . 8/8/2016 *screams* NOOOO WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME, TO HARUHI!? |
ImLiterallyEverywhere chapter 1 . 3/11/2016 HOW DO I GET TO CHAPTER TWO IS THERE EVEN ANOTHER CHAPTER I NEED TO FIND OUT SOOOOON! sorry but this has made me cry on the inside |
guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 Haruhi's dad's name is Ranka |
DatCrazyCritique chapter 5 . 1/27/2015 Ah. After reading the last few chapters of your work I have one concern that I wish to express with you. After somebody's dad dies they aren't better in a day. That is all. (LOL MAH NAME IS USUALLY DATCRAZYFANGIRL, SUITS ME RIGHT!? XXXXXXD) |
vanity insanity chapter 17 . 4/14/2014 this is really good! BTW you said you'd update like almost 3 years ago. |
XxRiotGamerxX chapter 14 . 11/7/2013 Awsome! Also do you know how to upload the writings or if you know what I mean? |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2013 T-T u made her dad die |
Miguel chapter 14 . 8/24/2011 Erm, forgive me if i'm wrong, but i do believe you've posted this chapter to the wrong story. There seems to be rather a lot of Harry Potter characters for a Ouran fanfiction. |
paigeydoll chapter 13 . 7/7/2011 Mori or kyoya - or maybe both :) - to be her roommate please! Ok i'm biased but still. Poor haruhi :( |