Nice outlook on this. The drug abuse in the FAYZ is always something I like looking into, and your piece has a nice little bit of reason and accident behind it.

I really liked how you explained the ending but there was one typo in it "found him new he was dead the " new should be knew.

NICE WORK

KATE

Wow. The emotion and heartbreak in this is perfectly written. I mean , in the series drugs was mentioned but not in too much detail and I wanted to say this is great. Poor Jordan and Jordan's friend for having to find him dead.

You brought up an important topic that not many people write about: drugs. I loved it so so much, especially the beginning, where it compared drug use to the garden of Eden and forbidden fruit. I loved it so, so, so very much.