OMG! now that is some kinky shit! love it!

Although, I was at first a bit shocked by it, I realized that I was also very proud. It was a refreshing and original piece that I haven't seen anyone attempt before. Great job!

o Byakuya não é gay, eu não acho que ele goste deste tipo de sexo, ele tem um jeitão mais dominador, acho que seria mais fácil ele ser possessivo e bruto, ele iria dar prazer a ela, e não só para si, bom mais ficou legal, abraços

Hmm, it was good. :)

wow, not what I usaully read, but it intrigued me so much, I really wanna read more. I dunno if you'd possibly ever continue on this one, but that would be awesome.

ok this really needs another chapter.

Um...why is this is the parody section? There's nothing remotely humorous about it...it's just mocking sibling affection...

I guess it was a good piece of writing (...?), but your characters (mainly Byakuya) were out of character and the entire thing was pretty much screwed up- I can't see Byakuya pressuring Rukia into doing this, but...

Technically good, subject-wise somewhat messed up...

I've nothing else to say, I'm kind of stunned...

~~Magickless

Only, why parody?

Okay, I admit I was a bit... thrown... by this; until I saw the genres that is. XDDDDD;;;

Good gods in the heavens, "Hisana is watching, let her guide you,"! It's so very, VERY twisted, and Byakuya's less than logical assumption of this being somehow Hisana's wish, with absolutely NOTHING to go on, is just... WOW, Rukia, WOW.

You really DO worship him if you fell for the old, "Your dead sister is obviously hoping you lick her husband's hairy ass-crack, to HONOR her memory. Oh, and if you don't, you're a BAD shinigami, too!"... I mean, c'mon! That's the oldest line in the book! XDDD;;;

Truly, this was hilariously wrong, and delightfully written as CRACK!fic (pun very much intended). So many times crack!fic authors don't tend to put much effort into their wording or style, and the fact that is very, VERY well written, yet so absurd in content provides an underlying humor, by the stark contrast that seems to imply a sort of dry wit.

Very much as if Byakuya were to tell a joke.

I can't help but want to see more of this perverse and ludicrous insanity. I could easily see this becoming a guilty pleasure of mine, were it to become a series.

Hearts and Hugs,

RS

surprise

like the twist in this story on why byakuya felt obliged to loook for rukia. Well i sure like the first lemon. update soon

omg! This is hilarious, it's so absurd, but in a good way. Just picturing Byakuya bending over naked in front of Rukia and saying, "if you honor your sister do this. hisana is watching, let her guide you..." omg, it's just too funny!