Nice. It was sad to read about the whole beginning, but I am interested to see how this turns out. A few words that are missing here and there, but nothing too noticeable. Keep up the good work.

So I'm guessing by this point there's never gonna be a sequel to this story? TT

Wow, absolutely awesome, I haven't seen a story this interesting since harry potter!

The last third of this chapter had you decide that "where" (typically pronounced whair) should replace the word were. True, these two words look similar, but they mean different things just as they sound different. "Whair are all the drugs going?" "What werr you doing?" What you're (you areyou're, not your. Another mistake you've made) is highly distracting to we Grammar Nazis and makes it difficult to enjoy certain stories, but at least you aren't the guy who spelled collapse as "claps."

Vodka Fisa is a great song. Almost as good as Irish. Amazing.

Sad to see that this story never did get its sequel...

Very intelligent with the latin. It really shows how useless google translate.
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C'mon dude I and a lot of other people really enjoy this series so if you could just continue with the series it would be really awsome.

Coca Cola is definitly better!

I demand a sequel right now .great story by the way

Dude, I don't know if you check your reviews, but please start making the sequel, I have been waiting since the beginning!

I'm getting impatient.

It 2013 June 24 By now,You think he make Sequel by Now

oh my god not to be ruse or anything please hurry up with the sequal i just cant wait

Update soon really enjoying your story