Damn I finally cracked aha! I wasn't going to start on a new paimpont fanfic cause of procrastination and stuff...but I did and I don't regret it at all. This was very very good despite me only having read half of Twilight, the descriptions were really cohesive and beautiful and the ending all came together nicely. I did have a theory that Edward's older brother got bitten by a snake while they were out and his older brother believed the survival myth of sucking out blood from a snake bite, so he told Edward to suck out all the blood from the wound in his neck, but it didn't work and he ended up dying anyway and that's why Edward is fearful of blood. Because it subconsciously reminds him of that traumatic experience and he was afraid of kissing Bella because it reminded him of it and he was subconsciously afraid he'd kill someone by sucking out all the blood but your way was better. I liked the nice touch with Edward being afraid of blood etc, it's a rare character trait in a male character but it was very nicely written.

Overall brilliant fic. I think I liked Serpent and the Mirror just a bit more because it was longer and more complex, but I honestly LOVED this one as well! Fabulous reads both of them! :)

Sweet one...
I think I get why someone would be more upset for Bella's sake than her boyfriend getting beaten after he tried to kiss Bella.
Bella was obviously unwilling victim of unwanted attention so... she figures Jasper deserved what he got (even as she blames the alcohol).

Oh and I think hemophilia explains Edward wanting to spend that much time with Bella... his instinct telling him he needs constant watching, and projecting that to Bella being the one in need. Besides, Bella seems to enjoy the attention.

Not as interesting as HP, but still a good one.
I'd love it if Harry actually saw how Edward got hurt and he became Cedric in his mind (mixed with Dudley), if only because they're played by the same person

Again a good tale. I didn't like it as much as the Harry Potter one (lol of course I pick HP over Twilight) but this was an interesting one as well. I think the issue is that Twilight is not as rich in references as HP, although you made brilliant connections in this one as well.

Wonderful. I really loved breaking down the Cullen myth into 'real' world possibilities. lol
A good head doc can explain the unexplained away. There are no such things as vampires people, no no no...
Kudos for another good read. Fav list.

I had fun reading your fic.
Very original

i just love these! do you have more stories about Doctor Dumbledore?

Again, you knocked it out of the park with this one hon! THIS WAS AN AWESOME READ! ;o)

Awesome story

Wow, that was awesome. Could you do a sequel? I love Doctor D's deconstruction of these worlds and secrets.

Fascinating end, although you didn't wrap up Mike's concerns about Edward's abusive tendencies, nor the siblings' oddities.

How intelligent you are. Are those history things real? Because seriously if they were you should show this to the Stephenie Meyer herself. This was so smartly written and very pleasant to read. I truly enjoyed it. I hope this will get more readers. You deserve them. Thank you, this was a magnificent story.

I think it would be interesting if you did one of these for the Hunger Games.

The story is good, though not as good as the Harry Potter one. The ending seems rushed and the whole allusion to the tsars... Comes out of nowhere. It jut doesn't seem to have anything to do with twilight.
The story itself also kind of seems short in contrast to the Harry Potter one. You also didn't go into as much detail bookwise.
The speculations about the surviving tsars is half correct. I researched the tsar family once and know for sure that Alexei was found dead. Of course it is possible that one of the daughters survived.
You use language very well. The style in which you present your story is interesting, but I think that the style is what is preventing you in giving a satisfactory ending as well. There is not enough inside detail. A fact which is pronounced by the shortness of the story.
Good work though. You should definetly keep writing

This was just absolutely fabulous, not to say the prequel wasn't, but there wasn't the same air of suspense and mystery, this was much more intriguing and thrilling. An amazing read as always my dear, masterfully written, and perfectly concluded.
-Lady Rain