I would love to read a continuation of this in BA and Murdock's POV. :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! You have no idea how many times i have read though this! It is GREAT! Thank you so much for writing! and PLEASE keep up the great work!

Aw that was really a good story! Love Hannibal and Face, they are the best pair EVER. Hey could ya maybe make a sequel or something...one where more of Faces past comes out and Hannibal and the team have to help him or something like that. I just really like ya way of writing them, it just fit ya know. And I would like to see them get more togehter... PLEASE write some more

Fantastic story. So many great elements to this story. I'd love to read a sequel where may be he talks to Murdock about the same thing *puppy dog eyes*

Brilliant Hannibal/Face dynamic!

I thought this was a really good story! Left me wanting to read more! Always a sign of a great story I think!

I really enjoyed this story.

Oh loved it! (Just watched the film an hour ago and what do I do? Lol.)

Definitely one of my favorite pairings. Face and Hannibal just fit together so well it would be difficult not to pair them. I do like how you hint at this throughout the story and leave room for growth. It's also amazing how your plot fits into the movie line perfectly. I never thought of Face conducting everything while in prison, especially not in that particular way, but it completely works.
You absolutely have potential as a writer and for this story. I urge you to create a continuation of Face's story. Maybe touch upon his past and build up his relationship with Hannibal. You've truly got something here. Do not let it go.
As you do continue to write, no matter what it may be, I do suggest getting a Beta. It will prove to be extremely helpful and will clean up any small mistakes that some people overlook.

Great story! I really like the Face/Hannibal ship and I think the subtleness was realistic for these characters. I also loved the pinky swear and the reference to billy :)

I would love to see a sequel to this story. Perhaps exploring the "it's not the first time" comment.

I hope to see more from you,

-PancakeMassacre

Fantastic story, and a very interesting explanation for Faces libertine prison life. It fits perfectly into the movie.

You captured the characters very well, and it's great to have Billy making an appearance.

Just one mistake (at least I think it is one..):

You write 'Hannibal squeezed his neck once. Then he released it, stepped away and returned to attention.' So Hannibals hands are of Face, right? But further down, after making Face the 2IC we read 'Hannibal nodded, and his hand slid from Face's neck.' How did that hand end up against Faces neck?

Is that touching mouth with thumb an indication for Hannibal/Face slash? If yes, please, please, could you write a sequel to this story?

Sorry, but I really started shipping this couple after the movie. Maybe it is weird (Am I reading to much slash? ;) ), but after seeing Hannibal shooting B.A. without knowing him at all just for Face it seemed possible.

Hee hee hee! "Man up, Lieutenant." Awesome. :D

Love it. Just enough of the A-Team whackadoo, and a real subtle UST undercurrent. Which for some reason really works for me with this gang.

I am intrigued by this concept... I could see Facey going through somthing like that to get to who he is today. You captured all the characters really well, (I love Billy the invisble dog's apperance). The last scene was perfect, especially Face's reaction to hugging.

I never really got the connection between the title and the story... Maybe I'm just missing somthing.

This is a really good idea, I hadn't thought about it before but with the way Face was running things at his prison, he could have been the one behind the scenes orchastrating everything. And I liked Hannibal's protective stance and the way Face thinks it was all worth it. Even though Hannibal ordered him not to sell his body in the future, I don't think he regrets it and would do it again in a heartbeat.