Oh Wheelie... This was an interesting read and certainly depressing, yet also surprisingly enjoyable. Well done. *Smiles a little, wincing at Mikaela's condition*

So this is why we don't get to see Mikaela in DotM, hm? /shot. Joking.

Anyway, yes, I really liked this. It's very well written, and shows a whole noew perspective of Wheelie. Most people depict him as a horny happy-go-lucky turncoat, but your characterization of him... Wow. You even managed to make him a villian! A sorry one, but a villian, nonetheless.

Nice work!

I LIKED Wheelie in the movies. I doubt he was trying to lure them into a trap with Jetfire, in the novel he said that the Seekers were both Autobots and Decepticons so he probably just wasn't sure which Jetfire was. I LOVED Jetfire in the movie though, he was funny.

Wow, that was good. Can't say anything that hasn't already been said, except for I hope you continue this sometime.

...that's sad...

you have to update and have optimus ironhide and ratchet and sam react to her death or near death

I must admit, this is certainly a different take on Wheelie, and I think I like this version better than the movie one. Chilling in a way, but I would say it is probably a bit more realistic.

This is one of the best POV's I've ever read, and from one of the smallest Decepticons view. I like this as it could be one possibility of what happened after the end of TF:Fallen. My hope is that you continue with a followup to this awesome story. :):):)

Wow. This was alot darker then I first expected, very intense and well writern. It is a different take on Wheelie's charcter, usually displayed to worship Mikaela, I like the fact your Wheelie still has some sense of loyality towards Soundwave. I was surprised he actually carried out the order, the emotion was excellent and I like that Sideswipe was there also. Whether Mikaela is dead or not, I guess you will leave us contemplating. I hope she is'nt, it would be intresting to see Wheelie's reaction if she survives.

Thank you for the great read.

Sapphirebee x