| Reviews for Cause and Consequence |
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alessa-vulturi chapter 1 . 7/30/2014 Hope everything ends well |
Bitchcraft chapter 4 . 8/10/2013 Amazing to be honest |
Dylan chapter 4 . 8/10/2013 Love love loved this! The characterisation was great and I literally had to will myself to stop reading so I could make it last longer haha! Please please please write a sequel! That would complete my life honestly xoxox Dylan |
Viviane Renard chapter 4 . 6/1/2012 This story is fantastic! It's the right mix of humor, blood, and teenage angst. Chris' mood swings are well done, showing that he truly is an insecure teen who still doesn't know what he wants out of life, much less how to get it. You love and hate him at the same time; he can be brave and caring, and at the next moment cowardly and vengeful. He's a very morally gray character, and that's what makes him so fascinating to read. I love the ending, and how Chris finally transcends into being a man through his "trial by fire." It leaves you wondering exactly what he's going to do, but you know for certain he's done with being hesitant. I do hope you find inspiration in Kick-Ass 2 (such an amazing comic!), and write a sequel to this story. I'd love to see what happens when Dave meets the "new and improved" Chris. |
MaybeIt'sTheVodka chapter 2 . 5/7/2011 Whoops, in the last comment I meant ch. 2, not ch. 1. Not that it really matters, it's still hot :) |
MaybeIt'sTheVodka chapter 4 . 5/7/2011 Awesome fic! I really enjoyed it, it's a great mix of drama and cute slash stuff :) I wish I had found it sooner! The scene in ch. 1, on the bed, was my favorite part. I have to say I fangirled over the prospect of the whole dick size contest, lol. Are you planning on writing any more Kick Ass fics, cause I'd totally love to read another, whether it be that sequel you mentioned, or something else. And (I feel like a creeper mentioning this), I have a couple of Kick Ass fics up. One is a little slashy, so you might like it. I only mention because you said you like to exchange fics and stuff. |
undividable chapter 3 . 2/28/2011 awwwww there is no more...perhaps i can bribe you with fanart? yes? - |
undividable chapter 4 . 2/28/2011 oh god i love this please let there be more and maybe even a kinda happy ending or at least an ending were dave learns the truth before someone dies XD |
Murder Junkie chapter 4 . 12/20/2010 I'm pretty sure I started reading this before, but never finished it... I wish I had, it's really good! This is one of the only fics I've read that not only stays true to the original story (without being boring!) while adding slash, it also stays true to the character's personalities. This is an AWESOME fic, and it's going on my favorites list. |
LiviaHyde7 chapter 4 . 11/24/2010 Loved this fic, if you do a sequel could you PM me for i would read it, i want to know what happens next! :) |
Sick Twisted Mind chapter 4 . 11/7/2010 Aww, I liked it, but I'm sad that it's over. |
Sick Twisted Mind chapter 3 . 11/7/2010 Oh no! Dave's gone! Save him Red Mist! |
Sick Twisted Mind chapter 2 . 11/6/2010 Yay! We got some nice hot smut! |
Sick Twisted Mind chapter 1 . 11/6/2010 Oooo...so deep and...neat lol. I like it. I like the stories where Chris is sort of spoiled and conceited. |
Roseminty chapter 4 . 9/16/2010 OH. MY. GOODNESS. That was fantastic. o_o The ending is perfect. Even after I knew there wouldn't be a happy ending, I was still wishing for them to end up happily ever after... But then I realized that wouldn't have fit this story as well. Very, very well done. The last line is brilliant. The whole story is brilliant. *Applauds* |