| Reviews for Star Crossed |
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erin200456 chapter 17 . 8/1 Hey there this might be a bit late, but I'm British and I'd like to read for it if possible |
firekitty55 chapter 6 . 4/22 okay, low-key that sounds like the best detention, I love organizing, and dusting's kinda fun |
Ryvr chapter 17 . 5/22/2017 Can I just say, it takes an amazing author to bring me to tears once. J.K. Rowling was the first to do so. She managed it twice. You however, you have brought me to tears five times in this single book alone. You are incredible. I do hope you continue on, not just wih fanfictions, but your own work as well. Never give up, no matter the writers block, or what happens in life. Because your writing brings people to tears, to smiles, to laughter. It takes an amazing person to do so. To touch someone through words is not an easy feat. I thank you for putting your creative mind out there for people like me to read. You've got yourself a dedicated follower 3 |
Camhk chapter 1 . 5/2/2017 I have a bad habit of starting long fics and getting distracted and never finishing them... but that has never been a danger with this series. Honestly, I absolutely love this story, and I'm so happy that there's so much of it! That you so much for writing, you're wonderful and I sincerely hope you keep doing it. I'd pay for this if it was a book, I really would. Now I'm off to read part 3! |
neffa chapter 2 . 2/11/2017 lmaooooo my favorite quote from the entire series is always going to be "oh shut up, weatherby" |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/31/2015 I love love love this fic, have read the first and second parts in the last 2 days and as it is currently 2am can't wait to begin the third when I wake up. Looking forward to major fluff with Freddie and George (fingers crossed) |
medvsa chapter 10 . 7/7/2015 Ooookay so I've quite enjoyed reading this fic and obviously you've already finished writing it, but there's some things that I just want to address I guess? 1. Hardly any of the women in this story ever talk about anything other than boys?! I instantly knew that when Win randomly started talking to Hermione that it was going to be about Krum :\ I just dread the girls' interactions because it's never about THEM, or quidditch, or their favourite songs etc. Always a boy. It seems like your female characters are seen as props rather than people. I'd recommend having them talk about things they enjoy & are good at, talking about politics, staying up late eating sweets and admitting fears, watching sunsets together, having inside jokes, blah blah blah blahhhhhh 2. How old is this Jasper dude?! You're aware that Alicia is only 16/17 and it's really weird that she's being used by someone, presumably, a lot older than her? :S:S:S:S:S Demonizing women by portraying them as overly sexual is overused! not original! harmful! annoying! a woman's worth is not measured by how much sex she has! And this random "bimbo" showing up, honestly. The way you described her seemed extremely sexist. "Painted up like a common street walker" and "underwear, if you could call it that." I'm sorry, underwear is generally quite skimpy. What was Winnie expecting? A wetsuit? 3. This is getting quite long, but when Ron gets all pissy at the Yule Ball, Win says he should've been born a girl! She's literally comparing Ron being an arsehole (unjustified if you asked me) to being female! NO? He's actually acting like men often do, when they really have no reason to? :S 4. You lift dialogue and description completely out of the books. You're aware of this, though? I mean I guess a little bit is okay but it's things like switching dialogue between characters instead of just writing your own. 5. Sexual harassment / catcalling etc. really shouldn't be taken lightly! It's important to bring attention to things like this because they do happen all too often, but unfortunately people like to use this as a plot device to make male characters defensive of their ~true loves~ It is a real thing that happens to real people. It's probably even happened to you. A witty remark once is fine, but to have this constant back and forth is boring, exhausting and predictable. I hate to sound horrible, I really do, because you're story has SO MANY BEAUTIFUL AND ORIGINAL things in it! A lot of it is really impressive! But the bad stuff has just been building up and making this hard to read! I'm not going to continue reading, and again I apologise if I sound horrible, but there's too much "bleh" and not enough "wow". |
beccalou93 chapter 12 . 4/4/2015 Just letting you know that it only snows like every 5 years, if that, in Ireland and it doesn't even cover the ground. Don't get me wrong, I love the storyline. But from one writer to another, if you are going to write about a country you have never been to, do research and make sure to get facts correct as to not offend people. |
prankster-at-heart chapter 17 . 4/25/2013 Beautiful. |
what chapter 12 . 10/13/2012 i'm sorry but that accent XD it's awful. i'm Irish myself, grown up in Dublin, and i've never ever heard anyone speak the way you right it. good grief. fix it please, it's just ridiculous. |
lolpants chapter 17 . 9/25/2012 I really, really, really must tell you that your writing is absolutely fantastic. Although the characters were a bit weak (see, Winnie came off a bit Mary Sueish adn Oliver was a bit annoying and you didn't really keep his character consistent to how he was actually written) I didn't once stop reading. Way excited to start the third part, and I have no doubts that it'll please me as much as this story did. (: |
xXTooMuchFreeTimeXx chapter 17 . 8/22/2012 I reviewed. |
The Girl That Runs With Wolves chapter 6 . 6/28/2012 This is amazing, I am enjoying the drama between Winnie and George, top job :) |
katie 996 chapter 10 . 4/7/2012 You need to have more faith in yourself! You are an excellent writer and I am enjoying this to the point that I haven't moved it days! Besides a few errors like, I can't pin point exactly because it was while I was reading that I noticed but you wrote he instead of I or added an unnecessary word. But i will admit that I'm quite anal about things like that which is why I tend to drive others insane. But even the best writers have there moments and even I do the exact same thing when I read through my work! So it's not a massive flaw in this flawless piece of writing :) oh, and chapter 7 (I think) may have been re uploaded by mistake because I've surely read it a few chapters ago... Any who, I'm going to continue reading now :) |
Mrs.Ninja chapter 17 . 2/20/2012 WOW! You are such an amazing writer! I absolutely love this story! |