| Reviews for Why He Shouldn't Have Waited |
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Vixen Kitsune chapter 1 . 11/22/2017 OMFG LOVE IT this is so well written I felt so sad after the first chapter ended and when I saw you had updated it I was so happy and omg so much lemon/yaoi. |
Neo the Dual Keyblade Wielder chapter 1 . 12/31/2016 I feel Haku would have effeminate traits on his whole body like an hourglass figure...you know thin..but with a nice, round, tight ass...Lol. Another thing, it's funny if Kami is allowing them to do that in heaven because, you know, it's HEAVEN! Also, I feel like this situation would have been implied in the canon Naruto...don't know and don't know...but hey, this is a basically a canon yaoi couple sort of in the Naruto series! |
ForTheLoveOfCOFFEE chapter 2 . 12/15/2013 Love it! Out of all the fanfictions I read about this pairing, this was the best one! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013 shota is not cool. |
Benluvdrowned chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 *nosebleed* that was interesting jk I loved it! |
Cupcake20 chapter 2 . 5/8/2012 I loved reading this story very much! I really love Zabuza and I wish we could be together in real life. Zabuza is so sexy! |
Cupcake20 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012 I had a good time reading your story about Zabuza and Haku. I think Zabuza is the most handsome man in the world! |
Maceklacek chapter 2 . 9/1/2011 waaa really beautiful:) |
Maceklacek chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 I love this pair no matter what. Even if they are old like the whole time:D Interesting story but i really dont like what Zabuza did. Why he did not just simply raped him?... |
Karasu Kagami chapter 2 . 3/19/2011 Im tearing up now. Apparently whatever femininity i posess has decided this is the cutest sweetest thing ever and keeps 'awwww'ing over it. I always hated their death (it was the first sign that the naruto-verse would not be fun for me as since then, one by one, all my fav characters have died...except Anko and Ibiki though the formor had plenty of close calls...and Hidan whos...'technically' still alive...) though i get it was nessessary for Naruto's nindo revelation and his mental/emtional develepment...-still- why them? -sigh- I know im ranting to a cyber stranger and yet i still go out of my way to look up these fics and torture myself with the 'if onlys' and 'maybe ifs'... The fic was wonderful and i loved it, thank you for writing something so touching...(and ranchy which is always enjoyable.), i hope to read more of such works in the future. -Karasu _-' |
Sen Ningyu no Sasori chapter 2 . 2/17/2011 Very nice. It seems to have a bit of fluff too. That's something you don't see very often in Zabu/Haku fics. |
Sen Ningyu no Sasori chapter 1 . 2/17/2011 So far, so good. I'm rather enjoying this. I always enjoyed this [pairing, there aren't enough of them. And way to keep them in character too. |
Candi Kiwi chapter 2 . 1/16/2011 Oh. My I cried at the end D: |
Suger Cane Panda chapter 2 . 8/31/2010 Just... oh my gawd! 3_3 |
PhoenixDivine chapter 2 . 8/16/2010 Your A/N's are so adorable. lol These were both very, very good. The first chapter captured the perfect sadness/anger/love that makes the pairing so wonderful. And sometimes I feel awkward for feeling shota is ever okay, but here it was perfect. You wrote it very, very well. I'm definately glad you did the second chapter. Haku gaining passion in his acts as well as desire and then Zabuza reciprocating in a way that Haku had always wanted him? Just beautiful. And while the ending was truly bittersweet, let's be honest, we all know they're "making up for lost time" in heaven. ;D |