When are u gonna f***ing update im begging u plz dont keep us waiting we love author-chan

First off, I wanna say that I didn't know this story was incomplete when I started it -_- which sucks because it was amazing and hasn't been touched in 4 years.
Secondly, I wanna point out the fact that your character and relationship development was spot on, the best I've ever read so far. It progressed at a nice steady pace and the plot was fantastic.

I really hope you get back to this story. I hate seeing great stories wast away. I don't know what in your life has kept you away for so long but I hope all is well and that you're ok.

When is the next chapter coming out? I want to know what happens next. Just curious no pressure

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Sorry for the late review. I'm really curious about the next chapter

Hey dude,

I really love this story, please update, I really like your storyline/ character portrayals.

Sincerely,

TheOddKeystone

Well, that happened fast. I jumped from Chapter One all the way to the latest chapter! I couldn't stop reading! I love all the humor in this, and the dialogue sounds so natural, I can almost hear their voices. I look forward to the next chapter!

-GG

Hey! Good first chapter! It can be difficult to hook a reader right from the start. Sometimes it starts off slow and sometimes the pace doesn't speed up until the half way point. I know this will go faster as the chapters go on, but you got me interested right out of the gate. Now I'm off to read Chapter 2!

-GG

I remember when I first skimmed the first chapters, I just thought, "He doesn't act exactly like Paul." And so I left for a different story. I came back with a new eagerness to see all of the stories that have potential, and I ended up rereading the first chapters once again, thoroughly this time, and I was quite impressed and eager to finish reading. A few chapters more, and I was hooked! I read almost all the chapters before I fell asleep an hour after midnight when I had noticed that my battery was at 3% and I was too tired to get up and look for my recharger. I woke up in the morning, plugged in my phone, and continued reading, and you know what?

Now I'm going to start crying because it is such an amazing story and I love it and I wish that you would come back and continue it!

Your story makes me laugh many times, as well as makes me smile widely with how cute the moments and Paul are. Though that is really an understatement. Your writing is superb and the character development is really fascinating!

Please, please come back to us!

"I have the urge to give you a big friendly hug right now."

"Fight it."

I know that someone already posted something in a review about it, but I just couldn't help it. XD It's just SO HILARIOUS MAN! Every single time I read it, those two lines, it never fails to make me crack up with laughter. And seriously, the suspenseful background of Paul! What's up with him? Who had been on the phone a handful of chapters back?

I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters, but it's such a shame that you haven't updated since over a year ago. :(

If you could, could you please come back?

Please Update!

Idk if you're still writing this but i hope you do complete it and start updating more often soon because its good! Really good. Like im seeing paul in a whole new light and before this i didnt like him OR dawn but you make them awesome! Flint too i love how he teases paul haha :)

huh...291 reviews, and...you ain't updated in nearly a year. mate, if I had that many reviews, I would have finished the fanfic by now. not a criticism, just an observation because, well, this is a good fanfic.

isn't it team galactic, not plasma?

Diz iz Awzome