grate story but its Riza not Liza

Such a great take on the events of that. I knew deep down that this wasn't a smut story. The fact that it said Angst and some of the dialect hinted to that fact but I still wanted to believe it was one! lol

Too bad my first instinct was right. It was so great though, hearing the internal struggle of poor Roy. The fact that Roy was so hesitant, about "not knowing what to do" solved the mystery of the story for me. I really don't think Roy would have any hesitation should Riza say yes to bedding him. lol

OOO! Plot twist! This had me fooled until the end! Very clever! Not many fanfiction authors can conjure up a story like this. :)

Oh my god. That was brilliant. I really was not expecting that, usually I can predict quite accurately the plot twists and surprises in a fanfic, but this one had me fooled right up to the last minute. I guess I should have remembered that Roy had to burn riza's back after ishval, but I didn't and so I was genuinely shocked by the twist in thus fix. It started off a bit cliched, like so many royai hurt/comfort ishval fics, but I'm sure that was deliberate, and even aside from the brilliant last paragraph or so, there were some great lines. It was short, but amazing.