This is a cute ending to the story. How cute that Tamaki calls him Neko. The hugging is sweet along with Tamaki's request to continue to hold him. The last two lines are funny.

"Can I have my wig back?

"No."

It's odd that the secretary intervened like that. It's just strange that a grown adult would try and help a student go after someone he has a crush on.

This is a cute story.

This is an interesting turn of events. It's cute how Tamaki has fallen for him and that Nekozawa is developing a crush as well. You did well with making Nekozawa sound nervous during their conversation.

One thing I feel I need to mention. Your author's notes are distracting. They are almost as long as the chapter, with very little relevance to the story itself. They may make potential readers lose interest in your story.

This sounds like it will be an interesting story. I never even considered this pairing, but I look forward to seeing how it will play out. All the blushing is sweet.

You might want to add a line, dashes, or something of the like to separate the story from the author's notes to avoid any confusion.

You should do an Adventure time fanfic :3

awww this is so cute :3 great job

cute

Cute

This is the first "Nekozawa-Tamaki" pairing that I have seen...to be honest I don't like them together :(

I thought the bits before and after the chapters were funny though :) so keep writing!

I do have an account but 4 some reason i cant login... any way awesome tamaXneko

I shall give you cookies if continue~

I love hoe Nekozawa is the perfect uke!

i loved the story and yes you should write more

REALLY short, but humorous none the less