Reviews for You Could Stay
fakeMelody chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
keep writing k I love it️ love love
BryannaB709 chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
I agree! Stupid Alice has to go back to stinkin Upperland, AND LEAVE THE HATTER BEHIND! P.S. Talice forever!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
Omg I totally agree with you I currently don't have my computer with me but I'm happywriter780 I'm just too lazy to get up and get it. But in my opinion they should. Make A sequel where Tarrent and Alice do end up together!
ASianSuccessor2012 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
This is a lovely piece of writing, and a wonderfully written story too! This is definitely how it should have ended! :) I felt pretty sad that Alice left everything behind, but now, you were able to reverse the situation and bring her back to Hatter! I love it. Well done!
servant123 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Agreed. Way more warm and fuzzy this way :) I commend you on your spectacular Hatter/Alice writings, I have loved all that I've read so far - and I can't wait to read more!

God bless :)
Pain Girl chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Yeah,Happy Ending!I Agree,I Wanted To YELL At Alice For Leaving.

Great Story!

XxPain GirlxX
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Thank you! I've always pictured it like this! Amazing, and so cute ;)
D chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Thank you fro writing the true ending! Loved it! :)
XxClairdelunexX chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Awwwwww~! it does give you the warm-fuzzies!
DetectiveConanFan13 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Yes! A satisfactory ending. You know, I was discussing the ending with my sister and she asked me, "Why would she stay in Underland?" and I told her, "The Hatter of course!" She just looked at me.

Thank you for writing because I surely enjoyed reading. Go AliceXHatter! .

Ja ne!

~J. DCF
Madigan Keen chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
"It's so FLUFFY!" -little girl in "Dispicable Me".
MatanyaFayga chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
That was adorable.
nolongerinuseee chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
brilliant! this should 'av 'appened!
OblivionsGarden chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I agree 2000% ! This ending was much better, I loved it !
Ngoc Chau chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
nice
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