Okay, so I have a TON to say about this. I've read it multiple times, and I just think it's so fantastic!

1. I always laugh when Sonny's mom hits on Chad. It reminds me of something...hmm...

2. Tawni is SO nice in this. It really shows off how their relationship has grown over time.

3. Chad is such a jerk sometimes. I mean, he practically called a girl ugly! I have to say, very in character there. :)

4. I must like making lists...I do this a lot. Oh well, I'm neurotic.

5. ISN'T SHE JUST ADORABLE? My gosh, I forgot about that! Fanny stuff!

6. There was a Channy kiss...how romantic. :)

7. I love how he still calls her an angel at the end. :)

Well, I've made a list that goes up to seven, and they arrived at the club at seven o' clock, so since I've said I'm neurotic, I think I'll stop where it makes sense. Keep writing!

Sincerely,

Your Biggest Fan

Hahahahaha. Sonny's mom. That was priceless ! Great job.

Cool (:

*shudders at inaccuracy*

A)It's a club. NOT the prom.

B)so OOC. Even I know that, and I'm not even a Disney obsessed crazy person (I'm a Doctor Who obsessed crazy person)

C) Sonny's mom is BRUNETTE! And wouldn't do that!

D)Run on sentances. Need I say more?

I'm so mean to my friends! ;) (Naw, I just offer much constructive criticism. And I'm nitpicky.)

Otherwise, good story!

this is wier in a good way

Now muffalo, ya know I love u, but really, stealing lines from our game? Didnt think you would sink that low. Nah, just kidding. I was LOLing throughout the whole thing. Fantasmic job! SMILES!

LOL