Are you Shakespeare’s grandaughter or something. Because you clearly have the skills of him. Or better. I can’t believe you wrote this. I mean, like, this is amazing.

Oh my gosh! This is such a good lemon writing! Those groping and kissing definitely adds the hotness of the scene hahaha

Aww. It was such a great fic! I really like it;

I love this, one of my favorite smut fics, ehehe

Woowwww... This is very well written. You did a veryyyyy great job doing this! Just wow

This was great. It was sweet as well as hot and sensual. Awesome job.

I'd felt like I've exhausted all the good HitsuHina fics already, so imagine my delight and surprise to find this diamond in the rough! Tender, urgent, intimate, exquisite. I wish Kubo would give us a little more about their relationship, but he's so bullheaded when it comes to romance XD one can only hope! and I hope you come back and write more of this couple someday, there's not enough good fic about them! Where are the two fics you mentioned in your author's note, btw? Do you have a livejournal I can read them on? :)

This is really sweet!
I have read other fics rated M like this but yours is really sweet. I could feel their love for one another...oh, I wish Kubo Tite would make more progress about them though..
Keep it up!

The reason I like this fic so much was that there was more "love and longing" than "animalistic cravings" which I think is a common occurrence in fics like this. I also like how both Momo and Shiro's characters were shown especially Momo's "fiery ness" :) Great job! PCE

I was looking for coherent words to properly put how beautiful this is, but I feel that's almost a crime to reduce love to mere words. And that’s what this fic depicts. Love. Sheer love, devotion, intensity. HITSUHINA – most of all, it was them in every syllable, every suggestion of word. The intimacy, the urgency – their genuine dedication for one another. The silly bickering through competitiveness in a trivial and inopportune dispute. The possessiveness, especially (the bites, the bruises MARKING MARKING– she belongs with him, TO HIM!). She's his finally as he's always been hers; and he has to control himself not to want to devour her whole – for he wants to own her soul just like she own his: and thus he bites, and holds tighter than he should, and kisses deeply until almost no breath is left in him. By this, he's caught completely off-guard, never having expected her to be so fiercely consuming - he should've known better, for she's like the fire in her core.

(Where were you all this time with this perfect writing and characterization for my dearest OTP? Doesn't matter, now that I found you and was able to read this, I'm in peace).

Very well written. Good job!

Good job done there. This really should have more than 10 reviews...

This Hitsugaya X Hinamori fic is the most epic-est most awesome-est better than all the Hitsuaya X Hinamori fics out there in you ROCK and this story deserves More than 8 reviews

this lemon is so good! )) i hope you make a sequel of this... nice job!