Great story. I love the take charge Hermione, who actually proposes to Harry.

Oh no! A cliffhanger!
I hope that Harry finds a book down in the Chamber that will unmake Ginny a parseltongue and to make Hermione one.
Great fic!

I'm confuses on the order with it jumping around so much. Ron ditches them, they get attacked by Nagini, life debt cleared, Hermione proposes, they're in the tent when Ron shows up, they stuff him full of veritaserum, tie him up, go off and get married, go back to take their tent and leave the letter. Is that the right order? Where does this chapter with them just engaged but staying in a hotel fit in? The hotel is brilliant. As well as using a laptop to clarify data. Though 1998 laptops were pretty bulky.

Fuck you. You blame Harry for Hermione's bullshit? Seriously? Of course, your mother was cunt whore who sold herself for two cents a fuck. So go commit suicide. Nobody gives a shit about you.

Never really thought of the life debt. Great plot idea!

Yyyaaaaaasssssss! I love the way you question everything! I love it. I love this!

So, where's the happy ending? :P

Following so I know when you finish it.

I am loving the vindictive Weasleys (though please let the Twins still be on the level). And the treatment of them as well.

This is a fantastic fic and I am loving it so much. Please post another chapter soon.

Boom! Love it. Hermione should end fights with Ron like that more often.

Still can't believe he thinks of here as an uppity mudblood but as long as she ends up with Harry I can live with it.

Hope he encounters them again so that we can enjoy more of this glorious punishment.

Oooh snap! Cliffie! More. MOORE! Yes, you must write more. (Ok. Seriously though. Write. More. Please)

This is how I feel when a good author leaves a cliff hanger at the end of a book “ I hate them” this is how I feel right now “ I. HATE. YOU. No offense

Nice logical reasons for Harry’s scar to be a Horcrux

I wouldn’t be surprised if Ron could speak parsel tounge right know he’s probably worse than Snape right now

PS when does Harry face Voldemort a 5th time I mean there’s once when he was a baby first year second year fourth year and then the next time is when he kills Voldemort for the last time

So, "C&C would be welcome"; I'll offer you some C&C then, PLEASE FINISH THIS! If you do, I may be persuaded to write something longer, and/or more appreciative...

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