And where is the next chapter? You said that you cut scenes from what was supposed to be a one shot so that you can add more chapters but then you abondonned this fic. *sigh*

Please, please update this! I love this and i really want more!

when is the next one?

Can you make the next one? i just love it! your story is soooo cute!

I cant wait! this is awesome! a gokuxsanzo is always the best!

ooooohhhh! so cute! i love it! your story is sooo goood!

you have got to make the next one!

please continue this! i really really like it!

please tell me youre making another one! please? i just love these guys

The idea is interesting, but you should really look into getting a beta; you have quite a few grammatical errors. Other than that, interesting story :)

I should say, I really like the way you write this story so far. That was really intense and adorable at the same time. To see Sanzo taking care of Goku when he is in a state like that while trying to restrain his own self from jumping to Goku was really sweet. I mean, it must be really hard for him to restrain himself like that especially when he sees Goku in that state. Though, I'm really curious as to what Goku's feeling for Sanzo. Does he also like Sanzo too secretly? Or he hasn't figured out his romantic feeling for Sanzo yet? I'm so curious about that. And I can't wait to see the development in their relationship. I think it will be great if you make this story longer because I'm really interested in it. Though, I don't mind with whatever decision you will take later because I will keep following this story of yours. Oh well, nice story and I hope you'll update it again soon because I'm so looking forward to it ;3

LOVED IT!

Such an awesome fic! I love it! but Goku only knows how to read and write Chinese not Japanese-I know it's a manga but the setting is in China-while journeying to the west which is India.

Nyaaaa! Hurry up and put up the next chappie!

i really like this story it was th best