Reviews for An Adventure Beyond Time |
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![]() ![]() Cyclops...4 feet tall?... Sigh* anyhow good story and great concept |
![]() ![]() zoe 4ever |
![]() ![]() The way kronos said his plan was not that good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the whole story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just thought of something, it should have been "Plan Sea" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy, just sleep in the Sea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK that would do it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unless he sends them way, WAY back in time, they could come back stronger than before |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story just read the first one and look forward to binge reading the rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet... And after this, Percy knows more than any mortal or demigod about the war of Troy because he was there... |
![]() ![]() Eh it's ok so far but there is absolutely no logic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess you never read the Iliad. Ares sided with Aphrodite, and it stated that he fought for Hector. Also, Poseidon started off on the Trojan side, switched to Greek, then kept switching back and forth. It was pretty confusing. I think he ended on the Greek side though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! after 5 years of researching... I FOUND THIS STORY AGAIN! one of the first PJO fanfictions i read and still in the top 50 :D keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, so cheesy. And the writing is fairly amateurish. I suppose it's understandable considering that this was your first story, but still, it seems as if you didn't edit it at all. Most of the sentences are poorly worded and the meeting with Kronos is fairly contrived. |