Beautiful and perfect. It was so simple, but so complex and I don't know what to say. I adored the last lines, " 'Not entirely nothing.' He grins. 'But every other day's a super nova or a space race or a peace treaty. I didn't want the competition.'"
Brilliant.

I love it, love it, love it. At first the different...senses confused me until I sat and took a minute, it's so well written that it blew my mind away. To me 9/Rose belonged together the most. Tennat's doctor was amazing and always missed Rose but when I think of the Doctor and Rose? I See 9/Rose in my head. You absoutly captured them perfectly in this story. I absolutely adore it.

Beautiful storytelling and characterization! Loved it.

Oh my goodness. SUPER CUTE! You have captured all that I love about 9th Doctor with "Here his words have flavors..." GREAT line. And nice bookending of the story at beginning and end. 3

I honestly can't say how amazing this story is, I've read it three times! The stuff with the mixing of the sences was a bit confusing at times. Over all a great story.

So cute!

Lovely absolutely lovely

Amazing concept! Love it!

Great story. I loved the concept of this planet and the role sense play. I also loved the way the Doctor and Rose were together.

I don't know why I have such a hard time writing them, but I love 9/Rose! And this was just gorgeous :)

Oh my! LOVE IT. This makes me SOOOOO happy!

Amazing. Simply amazing. Perfectly in character, and the way you've engaged all the senses... It may be partly because I just watched the whole season in two days, but I can really hear their voices, and see them acting like this together. You really deserve more praise than you've been getting.

You've captured the spirit of adventure, camaraderie & innocence of this pair perfectly, but what I particularly loved about this one was the cranking up of the spice between them (literally, as it turns out), while remaining true to those key elements.

Absolutely loved this line -

' "Filthy," he declares finally in a voice that really, truly is. "Absolutely filthy." She tastes spicy cinnamon and smells hot, burning pine. '

- sex, taste and gathering sensation, told so wonderfully economically.

This is why I love your words.

Well done, that woman. ; ) x

[Btw, not sure if you're into Twi-fics, but there's one - 'And With Thee Fade Away', by Derdriu oFaolain - that somehow manages to combine the usual High School fare with hints of the good Doctor - may be of interest..? Pretty original stuff, so far, at any rate.]

I love this. Perfect Rose and Nine, and a perfect scene.

This was absolutely beautiful, so well written in every sentence and packed with wonderful imagery and impressions. It deserves to be read by everyone.