Very well done.

this is really sweet!

That was a truly wonderful explanation of how Harry became Tom's son-in-law. Humorous and bittersweet, and very well written, thank you!

I really loved this! I'm not normally a Kes/Tom shipper, but the events that AU really needed to be explored. WELL DONE! :D

I think you did a good job. There are a few typos but I really enjoy the "lost moments" in episode stories. I look forward to more.

Oh, how adorable! I can totally see this happening - Protective Tom, level-headed Kes, and especially nervous Harry. I've always liked that alternate universe - Tom and Kes are an adorable couple. Also, the age difference thing is well handled, with the details of Linnis's development etc.