It's 2019, where's that next chapter lad? This story is fuckin great and I must know what happens next and how it all with end.

the story was good

So where's the next chapter?

XD LOVED IT

I NEED DA NEXT CHAP!

Keep writing!

I like the way the story looks so far, but it would be so much better if you built on it. Since this is Fiction T, you should put them together. I'm thinking kissing, dating, marriage. There's so much potential here. Keep on working, and write a brilliant story.

Here's a new name for Tails and Cosmo in a relationship: Cyberplant-shipping. Cyber-Tails' adeptness with technology and Cosmo's forced involvement with the Metarex. The plant part is obvious.

Would like to make part 2?

1Its kool
2whats the operation
3 Oppa Gangum Style [its my random day]
4 we are neva eva getting back togetha [: }]
5 Silvers hot and you know it [RANDOM]
6 . .

{Its a pig]
Silver: I understand babe, its your random day

where's chapter 2?

The Story needs to show Sonic Close to dieing, twists are always funny.

I loved this chapter so much, my friend. I can not wait until the next one. Keep up the good work.

Tails went through a bad shock when Cosmo died that he was just getting over. Having accepted her being gone forever it's now a shock for him to accept she's back for good. This will take awhile for him to adjust to. Luckily there are no Metarex still around to pick up any signals if that device is still there. Or are there? He needs to explain what he's doing and why before they get to the Blue Typhoon. It's clear he's frightening her.

Good to see this finally continue. Here's to another chapter soon.

You finally updated! :D Your style seems to have changed a bit, because I don't think Tails would actually act as paranoid as he did in this chapter, and there were a few typos and quite a few grammar issues that could use fixing. The main issue I have other than the shortness of the chapter and the paranoia in Tails' actions is the repetition of things. The first paragraph has a lot of sentences that start with "He (action)" when they could just be joined with the previous sentence. For example:

'He sat up in the bed and ran a hand through the tufts of hair on his head. He looked around the room and sighed heavily, "Oh...it was only a dream...but it felt so real..."'

This could be changed to say this:

'He sat up in the bed and ran a hand through the tufts of hair on his head as he looked around the room.

"Oh...it was only a dream...but it felt so real..." he sighed heavily.'

There is also the fact that in the next paragraph you started a sentence with "He then" twice in a row (lol sounds like "heathen" XD). Doing that makes it sound really repetitive. Just thought you would like to know. My suggestion: reread your previous story, and continue writing this story or rewrite this chapter according to the style you used before, in order to avoid changing the quality of the story and the personalities of your characters.

I reviewed the wrong chapter sorry. I've got to say. For this chapter it is really good. Your a really good writer. I'll have to keep an eye on this story for now.

Great job my love